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Big Mac Big Smack

Big Mac, Big Smack... what's all the damn fuss At home much cheaper, but still yummy stuff Easy, no problem Get bigger bottoms We're not so anxious to walk around in the buff

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/11/2017 2:44:00 PM

You are on a binge today my Jack. Take care.

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/11/2017 2:55:00 PM

Some day are up, some days are upper... this is an upper! Lovesies xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 9/11/2017 8:22:00 AM

Is Jackson craving a snack?//Due to lack of Big Mac?//Remember, being svelte//might get you felt//Bet that would make you quack! BUFF ON JACKIE BOY!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/11/2017 8:28:00 AM

Oh YAH! Can't wait to be felt... uh svelte!!! SITTING HERE IN THE BUFF!!! :(

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/11/2017 6:57:00 AM

Aw come on, you always wan to run around in the Buff! What a glorious write my friend! I surely loved reading your fabulous poem this morning, you have put a smile on my face! Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/11/2017 7:07:00 AM

In the buff I am MOST comfortable!!! LOL Isn't everybody???