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Big Ananab

I am long I am thin Yellow Is the colour Of my sunshine skin Sometime I come In green The coolest shape one has ever seen We come on bunches on a tree In a lunch box we will be We even have a frozen split Melting In a tasty treat I am long I am white I go down like smooth velvet With milk I go down light Sometimes Inside seen black But rich flavour I never lack Be careful when picking me For bite may come from dweller In tree Enjoyed much by the chimpanzee You know a banana Is what I must be A Collaboration by Liam Mcdaid & Michael Clarke.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/16/2014 8:37:00 AM
Great bababa banana liam. well written funny..rajat
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/17/2014 4:51:00 PM
you brought a smile to my face rajat thank you so very kindly dear pal
Date: 12/8/2014 3:24:00 PM
Hello. LIAM I just read big Ananab. I'll never look at a banana the same way again.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/17/2014 4:43:00 PM
i had to lol when i read a very beautiful comment thank you kindly valerie
Date: 12/7/2014 6:09:00 AM
Very humorous and well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/14/2014 11:40:00 AM
smiling it was fun to write ravi thank you kindly for the excellent comment bless you
Date: 12/6/2014 6:51:00 PM
A fun write guys...cheers
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/14/2014 11:35:00 AM
thanks tim dear pal bless you
Date: 12/6/2014 6:00:00 PM
lol made me smile - I wrote a poem fun and games with my banana - Darren Watson ran off with it - not seen him since - i want it back! hugs Jan xxx
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/14/2014 11:34:00 AM
thank you jan smiling beautiful comment lol bless you

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