Beyond This Valley

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" BEYOND THE VALLEY " FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, MY PHOTO,©

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Beyond this valley of the here-and-now over the snow-covered mountains of life's restrictions lies a world of unimaginable beauty of green pastures that stretch into eternity waiting to welcome the souls of the just so as to let them roam free in God's domain! © Demetrios Trifiatis 16 January 2018

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 1/16/2018 11:49:00 PM

"vover the snow-covered mountains of life's restrictions"..awesome line... I like this verse. I look forward to traversing these green pastures someday. Great one. Always, Laura

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/16/2018 6:57:00 PM

Hi Demetrios, I found this write to be so uplifting and well written:-)Alexis

Akkina Downing

Date: 1/16/2018 6:13:00 PM

Another beautiful and inspiring poem. I love it! Hugs and smiles :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/16/2018 4:05:00 PM

What beautiful write. As always...you life our souls and bring hope to our hearts. Filakia

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/16/2018 3:02:00 PM

Oh , I love this! Perfect! :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 1/16/2018 9:42:00 AM

Lovely marriage of belief with imagination ...an anchor of exultation ...

Silent One

Date: 1/16/2018 6:47:00 AM

Reminds me of a great Rumi quote, sounds like a great place to be..

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/16/2018 7:40:00 AM

My dearest friend, Silent One, about that place Pythagoras and Socrates have talked 1600 years before him and many others after him but each one has his inspiration from his muse as you have of yours and everyone else that is a poet! Thank you though for clarifying the point!

Silent One
Date: 1/16/2018 7:27:00 AM

It is a quote about a field of no wrong doing...I was not suggesting your quote was about that. Your poem reminded me personally of it. I know it has no connection with your poem..Sorry for any misunderstanding.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/16/2018 7:01:00 AM

I am sorry but I am not familiar with his work. I am mostly inspired by Pythagoras, Plato and Socrates my friend, S.O.! The source of truth is one my friend and all can drink from it if they are inspired to locate it! Thank you!