Beyond the Void

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ We never run out of words, In the winter There are still rivers that cry Defiant of frozen memories It continues to flow and surge Into a thousand pictures containing the dialogues of those we miss They're out there, Somewhere Beyond the void Though we cannot listen to their voices anymore They can understand our hearts now So even if we are apart We may find solace in understanding each other's hearts

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Paige Hind

Date: 4/17/2024 12:33:00 PM

So wise, you teach a lot of lessons

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/14/2024 11:35:00 AM

Dear Sara, This poem explores the deep subject of lasting relationships and connections, drawing attention to the power of keeping in touch and comprehending one another through thick and thin. Its message of perseverance and strength in the face of adversity is accompanied by stirring images and expressive words that make the listener yearn for simpler times.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/14/2024 6:42:00 PM

thank you, Sotto, for dropping by. I appreciate your kind words and mindful comments. Your insights are refreshing, for you see the meaning behind the words and images. Have a wonderful week ahead, your poetess friend in TExas, Sara

Silent One

Date: 4/14/2024 6:59:00 AM

A deep and profound poem, nicely done..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/14/2024 6:41:00 PM

thanks, Silent One. Appreciate you. Sara