Beyond the Paint

Beyond the paint, 
I hear the lilt of a violin 
string stirring, 
lazy and languid 
creeping through 
a lowly god’s veins. 

His ichor flows and foams 
with the sound of sea on 
white beaches, while 
siren’s song dirges, 
calling sailors to dance. 

thump thump thumping 
the beat of volta do mar 

The notes rise from 
greenlight to gray to 
midnight crescendo. 
Black chords of piano 
wild and wanton loud, 
and dark; it seems 
a sailor’s death 
is imminent. 

But, sound shifts sudden; 
ocean waves calm. 
The sirens fail. 
A life is spared 
as violin plays. 
Silver notes drift. 

Beyond the paint, 
a void in cobalt blue 
awaits— 

thump thump thumping 
A hypnotic tune 

of life and death 
is played anew. 


After: Blue and Green Music - Georgia O'Keeffe 1921 


07 January 2016
For Debbie Guzzi's Challenge: Ten Pictures, Ten Poems, Ten Days  - Painting 1
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Macmillan Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 8:41 PM
Lovely, sensual... great stuff. Glad I stopped by your page.
Andresen Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 2:50 PM
- This is art, dear Kim ! - I had not found a single line in this painting - (I think of green salad ..... sorry :) - Your words sing ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lindley Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 6:50 PM
Kim, you have penned a truly bright gem with this composition. Congrats on it being chosen by Debbie for painting number one. I too, am amazed at her insight, sage advice an editing abilities! YOUR POEM SHINES EVER SO BRIGHTLY MY FRIEND!
Laurie Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 4:40 PM
G'day Kim... I read, re-read, and re-read again Kim. Golly, this poem of yours is great - well done - Lindsay
Roper Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 7:49 PM
Very good, Kim, love the imagery of words you have chose for the painting. I love the picture the fine soften curves and the brilliant color blending. But it would be very difficult for me to write because I'm not an abstract person; I am very concrete :(
Sage Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 6:58 PM
excellent write Kim, this is wonderful
Dietrich Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Kim, this is amazing. And on that note you sent me on the blue/green challenge, it's something I would never try. I would not even be able to produce ONE like this, (not the kind of poetry that Deb likes with surreal images, etc) Also I need to write on various topics each day, not the same one times ten. Anyway, it was sweet of you to contact me!!
Nunez Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 5:50 PM
Thank you so much for checking out my entry, Andie. This is a learning experience for me and I'm glad that Debbie liked it. I have now posted her edited version. About the 10 poems, each day she will post a different painting, so there will be a variation in the topic. Interesting enough to keep my neurons active but would keep me from entering any other contest for the meantime. :-) hugs
Allison Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 11:28 AM
wonderful interpretation Kim:-) hugs jan xx
Boddie Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 9:56 AM
in the sea of Life....you will encounter pain, you will know strife....but what will keep you strong....is like a poem, the heart's song....and kim, your song always tops the chart....I am a true fan, I Love your art....;)
Callus Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 9:56 AM
Well done on a very lovely and creative write, Kim! When I saw that picture all I could see was cold, cool tranquility; you went way beyond that! ~ Regards & hugs // paul
Onclaud Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 5:20 AM
impressed, ohhh my, kim... your images burst with such lifting strains...wow!.. huggs
May Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 4:27 AM
Great write Kim.. Love how the music rose and fell like the waves in an unbroken melody...best wishes
Nunez Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 5:34 PM
Thank you so much for the read and support Joseph. This is a learning experience for me. I have now included Debbie's edited version. Kim
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