Beyond the Open Door

She stretched her arms across your abyss,
so that she could covertly open your door.
She cried as she peeked into your eyes,
for you held onto a grief that did not belong.
She promised to baptize you with positivity,
but she could not promise you wholeness.
Eternal bliss waits until the end of a journey.
Your place is here, within your current heartbeat.
Do not fear, you will find deliverance.

Tick tock, tick tock, time whispers,
as you grasp for your sanity.
Roots and branches are different 
and still they are the same.
Above and below the grass,
they stretch beyond the boundaries of shame.
They know there is fresh spring water 
and a blue sky to claim.
Root rot happens if you choose blame.
You will burn through obstacles,
for you are one who possess an ancient flame!

She watched you devour a bullet,
you absorbed the lead.
Your enemies believed you were dead!
Sap left your bark as you bled.
Yet, she could hear you sing beyond the red
“Ooh ooh the rain comes,
my eternal heartbeat drums,
ooh ooh my heartbeat drums!”
So she caressed your leaves 
with fingers and thumbs.
She was thankful to witness
one of the blessed ones.

She listened as the Church Bells sang in the night.
Under your branches she bathed in the moonlight.
There above you was a sky dotted with bright.
She felt more than your might,
you were a magnificent sight.
She allowed her imagination to take flight.
Her mind soared above flickering firefly light,
absorbing your pure bright white.

Tick tock, tick tock, you whispered her name.
You are both different and the same,
living on the thin line side of insane.
She felt no shame, no need for blame.
Ooh ooh the rain comes,
your eternal heartbeat drums.
ooh ooh your heartbeat drums.
She desires to caress you 
with fingers and thumbs. 

Your branches stretched across the abyss.
With your leaves her lips you did kiss.
She was awoken by an open door,
no longer a slave to her fear anymore.
Together you traveled to an ancient shore,
finding a place on the edge of paradise.
Yes, just a few steps beyond that open door!


Inspired by J.W. Earnings  
His piece  “Bite The Bullet, Edited Version”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Raven Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 10:24 AM
Hi Richard, you are an exceptional poet my friend. From beginning to end, I was entranced by your words as they flowed down the page, touching my heart with their deep meaning. I love the content and the flow. You use the free verse form to its full advantage. You bring the emotions out of your readers with such ease. A fav. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 11:20 AM
Thanks my friend. Blessings Richard.
Imtiaz Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 3:48 PM
Hi Richard... I enjoyed reading your poems as well. It is again beautifully penned. You have smooth flow of words and right choice of words at right time. Have a nice day my friend
Lamoureux Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 4:40 PM
Thanks Muhammad.
Rose  Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 4:55 PM
You created a masterpiece Richard, utter beauty exposed, with the bonding of loyalty anyone will thrive even the most wounded, thank you for sharing. Have a great evening
Chircop Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 4:06 PM
Fantastic write.It feels so good to read "you" again.
Romios Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 9:13 PM
Richard, one of the best poems I have ever read here! You are a master with poetry. Delightful imagery. Panagiota
Lamoureux Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 12:48 AM
You are kind, thank you for your generous assessment.
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 7:07 PM
this is very rich in metaphor. Such a complex but beautiful free verse write, Richard. Loved the imagery in this creative work.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 12:49 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Warrior Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 11:59 AM
Great write - a great read, Richard...kudos to J.W. Earnings...sending love...^WW^
Lamoureux Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 12:50 AM
Thanks my friend.
Y. Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 9:20 AM
WoW! Richard, When poems by poets like you, I think to myself " what I am doing here? I found this to be well written and thought provoking poem. I can't say enough, how talented you are:-) Alexis
Lamoureux Avatar
July 7, 2019 at 12:52 AM
I am pleased you enjoyed it Alexis. Do not sell yourself short, you are more than worthy to be here. I have enjoyed many of your poems that I have read.
Callus Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 7:45 AM
A most striking and meaningful poem, Richard. Beyond tribulations and harsh experiences there is the promise of a happy and positive outcome. ~ Regards // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 8:28 AM
Thanks Paul, I appreciate your visit.
Proxenos Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 11:06 AM
A deep powerful write Richard, brilliantly penned and ridden with mystical yet intense, heartfelt understanding of humanity which touches my soul and being. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 1:45 PM
Thanks Jennifer, I’m pleased you enjoyed it.
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July 5, 2019 at 10:38 AM
What a beautiful poetic response to J. W. Earnings! I have read his beautiful and deep poem! Thank you soo much, Richard, for bookmarking such a beauty! You got inspired in an outshining poetic flair! Positivity.. Love.. Fairy mystery.. A heavenly write! Deeply pleased to read your poetry.. Blessings.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 10:41 AM
Dear Besma, thanks for such a lavish response. I add this to my favourite responses today. You and Demetrios have added a spark to my morning.
Trifiatis Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 10:28 AM
Superb profound writing with deep understanding of human nature dear, Richard! A pleasure to read!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 10:30 AM
Thanks Demetrios, if I could favourite a comment this would rate highly.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 10:27 AM
Quite lovely, Richard! A sad song but one that soars!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 10:31 AM
Thanks Kim. Hugs Rick.
Breidenthal Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 6:38 PM
Wow, this is magnificent!! Thank you for sharing this amazing masterpiece. :) This was real good! I am glad you dedicated this poem to my song. -JWE
Lamoureux Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 6:44 PM
So pleased you enjoyed it. Now people please read J.W.’s poem. It truly is inspirational.
Michael Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 4:05 PM
Inspired you were...Enjoyed it...
Lamoureux Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 6:44 PM
Thanks Arturo.
Chiri Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 3:55 PM
Wow Rick! I agree with Nette! It was a wonderful read!;)
Lamoureux Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 4:00 PM
Thanks Brenda, that makes my day.
Onclaud Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 3:35 PM
rich, an intriguing write which rouses the senses...grreat pen!...huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 3:45 PM
Thanks for being the first to comment. I was beginning to wonder if I missed the Mark with this one.
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