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Beyond the Last Mile

At the edge of life’s horizon floating on fate free the new sun arose with color spectrum spree, my lone languid life woke up and promised me, someday it would sail me across the stormy sea. Reach my dream’s charming island I’d like to be, where I would absorb the twilight patina in glee, and soak the soul with stardust glow of ecstasy, but this would never happen, I couldn’t foresee. Life didn’t keep its promise discarding my plea, I couldn’t rise from the fallen sky’s dark debris, with the dusts of despair I find the dreams flee beyond the last mile of journey, the path I see. August 17, 2021 Brian Strand's Contest A Strand (1046)

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Date: 1/7/2022 11:03:00 PM
Your vision lets others see things in a new light as with this beautiful line “the new sun arose with color spectrum spree”. Your talent shines bright in this wonderful winning poem Subimal. I enjoyed it. Congratulations! New year blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/7/2022 12:13:00 AM
Beautifully written. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/25/2021 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations, Subimal, for your excellent win in William's contest with this beautifully expressed poem filled with rich imagery and emotion. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/20/2021 9:42:00 PM
A thousand steps start with one, therefrom, lies one's fate. One's faith is taking the first step, as it to be the hardest. Blessings, Subimal, for sharing your profound talents, Aloha!
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Date: 8/17/2021 12:31:00 AM
Sometimes it takes a lifetime to see a glimmer of dream's hope. Nicely written...ab
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