Beyond the Land of Counterpane

Gentle sounds of rainy days, Cool dampness on a counterpane The memory of my childhood years, beneath a quilt of poetry Stirs longing for that healing grace, that comes again upon the page... A mother's touch with vapor-rub Some toasted bread, a tender face A playground out beyond the dew.. The dampened swing, my misty view.. A shadow was my childhood friend, and sick-bed days a game Imagination flew so high, my carpet ride to magic lands My tattered book of childhood poems, still takes me by the hand
................................................. My first introduction to poetry...Robert Louis Stevenson's Childhood Garden of Verses (A sick-bed keepsake that kept me company)
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Johnson Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 9:48 AM
I have always loved his poetry and this one rivals his. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 6:44 AM
Congratulations to you for your win in Brian's "Any Which Way" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 5:23 AM
Congrats Carrie on a fantastic win in Brian's contest with this momentous piece luv..
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January 14, 2010 at 7:16 AM
Congratulations, on your success in Brian Strand’s “A LITERARY LOVE AFFAIR” contest with your poem expressing the love of Robert Louis Stevenson you learned and dreamed as a child. It's easy to see why you are in the winner’s circle. Your poetic skills excel. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 11:57 PM
Ditto what I said in the other contest (you know) Congrulations, CArrie. You genius you.
George   Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 10:23 PM
Carrie, I loved this the first time I read it and knew it was a winner. Congratulations! Love, Lainie
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January 10, 2010 at 4:49 PM
congratulations ,Carrie. Great job. All this honor must be getting heavy! :)-Robert
Johnson Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 1:53 PM
Oh I like this. I memorized that poem as a youngster and I think I can recite most of it. Thanks for the memory and congratulations. Love, Joyce
K. Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 8:57 AM
Oh, I could definitely relate to this, Carrie! I loved his Garden of Verses--I was so mesmerized with his poems as a child, I believe that together with Enid Blyton he is also responsible for inspiring me to write poetry as a child--he actually gave me shivers when I read this collection! Super congrats on your win with this one--loved it!
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January 2, 2010 at 4:08 PM
Congrats Carrie. Amazing write. Vince
George   Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 11:31 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, dear Carrie. I knew it was the first time I read it. Absolutely beautiful.! Love, Lainie
Strand Avatar
January 1, 2010 at 2:38 AM
Congrats on you success in my contest Carrie Rgds Brian.My latest contest Flow ,River,Flow is now open
George   Avatar
December 31, 2009 at 3:25 PM
Abolutely beautiful! Breath-taking actually! A winner for sure. Love, Lainie
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2009 at 11:45 AM
wow, carrie, this is one of the best I've seen. And I love your choice of writers! Greatest of luck in the contest. Luv, andrea
Brown Avatar
December 30, 2009 at 9:58 AM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Carrie. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 11:55 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Carrie.Rgds Brian
Strand Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 11:42 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments Carrie.Rgds Brian
Guzzi Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 4:49 PM
One of my first too! My Mom had them memorized and used to recite them to me. Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 4:49 PM
Nicely done write that should do well in the contest. Good luck. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
Sheart Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 4:44 PM
Carrie, This is a beautiful narrative. So heartfelt and deeply moving. Love your sentiments so precious. The ending magical.I will have to look Robert Steven's up! This will make a wonderful entry in Brian's contest. Wishing you the best of luck hun. Thanks to for your beautiful sentiments on my latest poem. Bless your heart. Love Light Patty
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