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a widow forever branded lost alone meandering about dense hazy cold misty fog timeless ageless wondering what lies beyond hearts throbbing with pain in fog AP: 3rd place 2021 Submitted on April 3, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (APR 5) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on October 11, 2018

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Date: 4/5/2021 12:25:00 PM
Your heart concealed by the fog. Well done! Congratulations, Line!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/5/2021 1:21:00 PM
thanks, Kim ~
Date: 4/4/2021 7:06:00 AM
A wonderful 2018 piece that I suspect may take on extra poignancy now Line. Congratulations on your 1st in Brian's contest. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 4/5/2021 1:57:00 AM
I'm glad you did Line. I love poems that evoke atmosphere and mystery.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/4/2021 2:52:00 PM
Thanks, I thought I'd dust that one off ~ lol
Date: 10/13/2018 5:28:00 AM
You might not want to find out!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/13/2018 6:29:00 AM
A little mystery is often a good thing.
Date: 10/12/2018 11:13:00 AM
Wonderful how just one word per line can carry the weight of mind, nice work.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/12/2018 11:17:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Sheri.
Date: 10/12/2018 10:52:00 AM
This is exquisite in its simplicity... perfectly captured! ;)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/12/2018 11:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, Rhona. Most appreciated.

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