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Beyond the Breakers

As you rush in pink love for the brown shore In dense rows of blue passion to embrace The green earth waiting with love in its core We in wonder look on horses in race Your breakers sweeping over me in glee In sheer amazement as I stare beyond The vista whispers a blue symphony Infinity spreads over to respond This dialectic between land and sea This mighty rush of breakers for release Eternal wait of both in pleasure spree An awesome dazzle and sound synthesis As cool stars from dense night come into view Just then on the beach of time meet we two _________________________________________ 09/02/2017

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Date: 2/19/2017 10:42:00 PM
Another beautiful sonnet Probir, this is my favourite form of poetry and you have done it proud, thank you so much for sharing and take care.......Vera
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/20/2017 1:02:00 AM
Thank you, Vera ...
Date: 2/10/2017 8:39:00 AM
Lovely, Probir!
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Date: 2/10/2017 9:10:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 2/9/2017 10:46:00 AM
Beautiful romantic love song. Probir:) Good luck my friend!
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Date: 2/10/2017 7:53:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel ...
Date: 2/9/2017 5:58:00 AM
A melodic symphony of feelings expressed in a magic way dear, Probir! A seven my friend!
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Date: 2/10/2017 7:54:00 AM
Thank you, Demetrios ...
Date: 2/9/2017 4:01:00 AM
- Probir, this is a wonderful poem - Enjoy each line - I wish you luck in the contest ... hope you will win - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/10/2017 8:06:00 AM
Thank you, Anne ...
Date: 2/9/2017 3:56:00 AM
This poem can be felt as it is read, the splash of the sea air tasted by the tongue as well as the eyes. Great job Probir.
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Date: 2/10/2017 8:06:00 AM
Thank you, Phil ...

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