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Beyond the Breakers

BEYOND THE BREAKERS There is a place Where the Ocean is more blue Where you can feel the movement of the sea Without being pulled through It’s beyond the breakers My favorite place to go to Where I will sit on my Surfboard for hours Meditating, dreaming, watching the seagulls Once I saw a whale And I’m used to see lots of dolphins too I’ll pass seeing a shark though I like my legs right where they are, thank you! I love to stay there To watch the sun and Ocean dance That’s how it looks to me When I watch those gorgeous sunsets It’s like a transcendent moment Where a calmness fills my soul That’s my favorite place in the whole universe To be beyond the breakers, on my Surfboard… *** February 08, 2017 For the Contest: BEYOND THE BREAKERS Sponsored by: Anthony Slausen

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Date: 2/11/2017 12:12:00 PM
Love this breezy write!... I agree with you about the sharks!!... but I also share your love of nature. I used to lay on my horse's back and let him graze when we were bare back trail riding, watching clouds and sometimes deer...I know this transcendent moment you speak of...well done:)
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/12/2017 7:47:00 AM
Oh Chris.. we have the love for horses in common... me and Hubby have 2 horses... They are amazing animals and it's such a great feeling to ride them <3 - Hugs xoxoxo
Date: 2/11/2017 2:02:00 AM
Will you take me there, when I come visit you? :) Good luck my sweet friend!
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/11/2017 5:45:00 AM
That's a deal! I even have the perfect beach in mind to take you!!! :)
Date: 2/9/2017 7:05:00 AM
This was wonderful Claudia, a little humor mixed with immense beauty. Sounds like a breathtaking experience to me. Good luck in the contest
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/9/2017 5:23:00 PM
Thanks a lot Chris! It does sound amazing, doesn't? :) xoxoxo
Date: 2/8/2017 11:15:00 PM
This is gorgeous Claudia <3
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/9/2017 3:49:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend! I'm happy you liked :) <3
Date: 2/8/2017 10:03:00 PM
Gorgeous...I'll be watching the sunset too
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Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/9/2017 3:44:00 AM
Sighs - that's really a special moment when you see the sun setting on the ocean :)

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