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'beyond Barren Land' - Haiku

lush green meadows a sight to treasure… beyond barren land

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Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/29/2011 4:33:00 AM

Many congratulations for this super win.

Christine A Kysely

Date: 1/27/2011 10:00:00 AM

Beautiful Images...Really, really beautiful Christine

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/25/2011 6:10:00 PM

sounds good....makes your mouth water!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/25/2011 2:17:00 PM

Nicely written my partner in crime.. love the images brought out in this write..love Michael

Jay Del Fierro

Date: 1/25/2011 1:11:00 PM

sometimes,it seems like the barreness of certain surroundings,can give us a healthy appreciation of the beauty that does surround us.....maybe,we are all walking oasis's and don't know it ?!!....peace , jay

James Fraser

Date: 1/25/2011 12:43:00 PM

And everyone an oasis Wilma, lovely Haiku....:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/25/2011 10:05:00 AM

Sometimes we have to work through a very barren place before we reach that place of beauty..Great topic that you have chosen to write upon this day..Your presence at my work this morn was such an uplifting moment in my life..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/25/2011 8:12:00 AM

reading this inspires hope-- very nice take you have here missy-- and thanks for dropping by there again :) happy you like it :) -- see you around ok? haha I am sucked right back in!!!! aaaackkkkkk hugs-nikko :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/25/2011 7:29:00 AM

i feel the verdant scene comimg to life,wilma... best of winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2011 7:00:00 AM

There are places like this, wonderlands existing right beyond the barrenness. VEry nice, Wilma.Is it for the new contest?

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/25/2011 6:53:00 AM

Gorgeous image Wilma.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/25/2011 6:11:00 AM

Quite meaningful write with lovely pen picture, Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/25/2011 5:30:00 AM

Splendid Haiku Wilma.. extreme visual content and your syllable count is perfect my friend.. good luck in the contest with this awesome entry .. happy day luv..