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Beware, My Friend

Beware the tenderness of anyone’s toes Especially that of your bevy of foes, For pain, they say, is its own reward And is magnified with additional woes. Beware of the sharpest words spoken For they offer little more than a token, And will come back to haunt in time When feelings of good will are broken. Beware those who seek your alliance, For they have capacity to offer defiance When your actions they do not approve, And you are seeking a friendly reliance. Beware, my friend, of every slight Keep both friends and enemies in sight And walk your own paths in caution Especially when strolling in darkest night. written October 3, 2021 (not written for a contest, but practicing the format AABA)

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Date: 10/6/2021 12:44:00 PM
We need to be hypervigilient at all times.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/6/2021 12:50:00 PM
So true. Actually, the times I regret most in my life were times when I said or did something utterly despicable without even realizing what I was doing.
Date: 10/3/2021 1:36:00 PM
A verse full of wisdom Milton, you should enter it. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/3/2021 2:05:00 PM
Going well, Tom. Unfortunately, it doesn't meet the requirements. He's looking for an interlocking rybaiyat with 8-syllable lines. That's very difficult to do, I think. Anyway, I'm going to work on it.
Date: 10/3/2021 12:42:00 PM
wise words indeed Milton I especially love that final stanza:-) hugs Jan xx
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/3/2021 2:05:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan.

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