Beware

Last night in a forest, poor Dan got bit by some creature. He ran to the safety of home, but as I write this poem, he's changing! Beware the wolfman! Feb. 26, 2020 For Richard Lamoureux's Warning Poetry Contest

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/20/2020 12:35:00 PM

Andrea, Great Limerick with a Wolfman named Dan. Beware the name, this poem's bite during a full moon. -Richard

John Watt

Date: 3/15/2020 8:40:00 PM

Nice win, congrats!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/15/2020 11:36:00 AM

Congrats on your win, thanks for entering my contest.

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/1/2020 3:02:00 PM

Haha! This is exceptional, Andrea. A clever and enjoyable limerick. Love it! Warmest wishes for you and best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Bette Bavington

Date: 2/29/2020 5:24:00 PM

This is super. I will in deed stay in on a full moon. Complete surprise for it to be a Wolfman.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/28/2020 9:33:00 PM

Hello Andrea … very witty indeed Andrea - thank you - Lindsay

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/28/2020 11:40:00 AM

I wrote about a man turning into a wolf as and when he wanted. Another fantasy tale of mine. Mr. Williams, fact or fiction! Love this limerick Andrea, very cool. Blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/27/2020 7:42:00 PM

Ah! You've discovered my secret! Must be that new cub who leaked it. LOL. Good one, Andrea! ~ Wolfman Dan

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/27/2020 6:09:00 PM

Hello Andrea, I would not want to be out when the wolf man is out. have a nice evening my friend.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/27/2020 4:43:00 PM

First, sigh of relief that there isn't a limerick contest I NEED to write for then second and foremost this is well done, entertaining and creative for Richard's contest (I read about it earlier). A delightful limerick, playful, as well. Love, CayCay

Rico Leffanta

Date: 2/27/2020 12:42:00 PM

Beware indeed! To see in the dark you must be in the dark! Best of luck! Aloha! Rico

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/27/2020 8:49:00 AM

Lol! Andrea, I enjoyed this in it’s entirety. Loved the last line! I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 2/27/2020 2:42:00 AM

This is so clever and the execution is flawless.

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/26/2020 10:12:00 PM

Always thought ol' Dan was a bit on the hairy side. Good one Andrea...

Ts Poetry

Date: 2/26/2020 9:48:00 PM

I will avoid the forest lol

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/26/2020 8:50:00 PM

My husband used to be a wolfman, but he's ok nooooooooowwwwwwwww...

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/26/2020 8:46:00 PM

Love it, even a man who is pure of heart and says his prayers at night may turn into a wolf when the wolf bane blooms and the autumn moon is bright. From a Ken Kesey novel, I've never forgotten it. Good luck Tom.

John Watt

Date: 2/26/2020 7:38:00 PM

Clever limerick, Andrea. GL in the warning contest, and keep an eye out for old Dan ~ John

Jan Allison

Date: 2/26/2020 7:12:00 PM

lol Andrea a clever limerick - I'm not worried about wolfmen or faceless trolls lol:-) I say poem as PO EM yet others say it a 'pome' which rhymes with home - yet again we find differences in our language :-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Adams

Date: 2/26/2020 7:10:00 PM

lol...yikes! reminds me of my walk to the car this morning... as I was walking in the dark I heard some strange noise and couldn't close the door fast enough... the country can be eerie at times...I will have to keep my eyes out for werewolves though... best wishes in the contest Andrea :) hugs