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Between you and heaven? That's easy if I must choose. No eenie-meenie-miney-moes. You'd be my choice, well, because you're also a heaven, mine to cherish, in case you don't know! Oh yes, I'd pick you, my angel A heaven here on earth. You're closer and more tangible to me. Oh, heaven above, please pardon me! You'll have to wait until the end of my days In the urgency of now I'd rather choose you; a piece of my soul. Submitted for... Na Poem From A February 2021 Judged Contest - Poetry Contest N/A in ALL YOURS (Feb 19) Poetry Contest Judged on 2/19/2021 8:20:00 AM Sponsored by Constance La France Date written: 02/18/2021

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Date: 3/19/2021 11:02:00 AM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my NA Poem from a Contest Judged in Feb 2021. I love this poem and the quote image, well done _Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/19/2021 11:39:00 AM
Thank you so much for my placement and congrats, Constance:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 3/18/2021 4:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. "Love It" A beautiful/heavenly write and picture. I would love that picture on my wall. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/18/2021 10:27:00 PM
Thank you so much for the feedback and congrats, Paula:-)
Date: 3/18/2021 2:25:00 PM
Edward congrats on this romantic write! Well deserved top place!!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/18/2021 3:59:00 PM
Thank you very much indeed, Krish:-)
Date: 3/18/2021 10:43:00 AM
Absolutely heavenly Edward. Beautiful metaphor with layers of double meanings. Well done. Congratulations on your win.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/18/2021 3:58:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sam:-) Blessings to you, my friend!
Date: 2/18/2021 1:05:00 PM
What a moving poem... with such Defined and clear meaning, Edward. Thank you Panagiota
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/18/2021 1:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Panagiota:-) Blessings to you, xoxo
Date: 2/18/2021 12:44:00 PM
A beautifully-written piece, Edward. I especially enjoyed the sentiment in the last verse. This would have been a nice Valentine's gift for someone!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/18/2021 1:02:00 PM
Thank you very much, L. Milton! I'm glad you appreciated this poem of mine. No worries, I've already written "Be My Valentine" for wifey:-) Blessings, bud.
Date: 2/18/2021 12:13:00 PM
Hello Edward, I love this poem. The last verse is beautifully done. Blessings my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/18/2021 3:41:00 PM
Hello Edward, you arewelcome. enjoy your day my friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/18/2021 12:21:00 PM
Thanks for the wonderful feedback and visit, Darlene:-) Stay safe out there, my friend.

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