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Better Death

Blinding light ... mushroom cloud background Radioactive night ... undulating shock waves and a shrill death sound Buildings falling down all around, people crying and dying It's a horrible thing to see, civilization come crashing to the ground For some, when the nuclear taps are played, they died instantly Perhaps theirs was a better death, as opposed to the poor souls who got left Left alive, to try to struggle to survive Eating dog food from a can, makes you feel more like an animal than a man Perhaps the worst kind of suffering is to experience living death Body parts falling away each day, laboring to take another poisonous breath Who's to say which way is a better death, when your humanity is stripped bare and there's nothing left

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Date: 4/5/2017 8:57:00 AM
Excellent presentation of the potential for mankind's evil to destroy.. Tragic that now the world has such horrific capabilities and even more so--since man usually finds a way to use such. We all had best pray--never again.. A7 and a fav, my friend..
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Date: 3/29/2017 11:58:00 AM
So powerfully penned. I found the intense imagery of the atomic explosion so chilling Freddie - a stark warning about the dangers of these weapons of mass destruction:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/29/2017 11:58:00 AM
Intense to think about and you have written it with that intensity Freddie. Well done.
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Date: 3/29/2017 11:52:00 AM
Wow, this definitely isn't a springtime poem. :) Dark my friend, very dark and frightening but very well written. That's not how I would choose to go.
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