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Better Days

Better days I'm choking on a truth that's seldom heard... Justice falls to the ground without a word Another day... and nothing seems to change Pray that soon will come better days Yes, pray that soon will come better days! For bite size poetry contest

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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/23/2023 1:40:00 PM
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Well done my friend!:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/14/2024 7:40:00 PM
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Thanks Brenda
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/15/2023 4:34:00 PM
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Revelation 21:4. Sooner rather than later Johnny
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/14/2024 7:40:00 PM
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Yessir brother!
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/29/2023 10:28:00 PM
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Another day and nothing seems to change, I felt that line so deep in my soul! So true and well written in few words, you’ve expressed so many thoughts in a profound manner! Goodluck for the contest
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/30/2023 11:04:00 AM
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Thanks IE your comment means a lot to me!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2023 7:48:00 AM
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I expect this will do well. Best of luck in the contest.
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/19/2023 10:51:00 AM
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Thanks Rick I appreciate your support!
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Alexis Y.
Date: 10/16/2023 4:34:00 PM
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Hi John, I echo what Vijay said. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-)Alexis
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/18/2023 2:09:00 PM
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Thanks Lexi
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Silent One
Date: 10/16/2023 11:30:00 AM
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I think this must be an extract from a song.. excellent choice for a bitesize..
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/16/2023 4:09:00 PM
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Ah looks like you caught me lol. Thanks for the kind visit.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/16/2023 6:03:00 AM
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Thoughtful, meaningful poem, John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/18/2023 2:09:00 PM
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Thanks Vijay!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/15/2023 3:31:00 PM
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A full bite for sure. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/16/2023 4:10:00 PM
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Thanks Rick for your kind visit and comment.

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