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Betrayal the Poets' Demise

He’d longed to feel life’s clement breath While writing his letter in the sand, He wrote of a premature death A life taken by one’s own hand. The whole world knows it’s sometimes hard When life’s a gamble the skill to play the right card So easy to put on a face, when emulating the bard. Childhood a promise, a fact of life No going back though, his head a habit of strife Love an entity, only stimulated the knife. The cutting edge, was so hard for you dear Seth In their perfect world the bullies held the upper hand, No one to protect you in the school yard No one to protect you from life. © Harry J Horsman 2018

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Date: 12/4/2018 5:35:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this great poem, Harry , very well written. It stirs a reader's imagination and the very sad emotions . Congratulations on your win! Harry if you drop the poem one line down then indent it will stay, but if you don't it will stay at the of the live against the line.
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Date: 12/3/2018 4:42:00 PM
Harry, congratulations on your win in my contest with this outstanding write ~
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Date: 12/1/2018 8:55:00 PM
Unlike MASH's great untruth---i.e., "Suicide is painless"---you've depicted it quite correctly...and poignantly. G.L. in the contest! ~ Gershon
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Date: 11/27/2018 8:40:00 AM
Theme is wonderful, Ive not seen a Fragmented Poem before...like the staggered step approach..will try this myself. Thanks
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Date: 11/25/2018 8:08:00 PM
Poignant and skilful.
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Date: 11/25/2018 10:57:00 AM
Well spoken Harry. Bullies do take all the joy from life especially when young. It's hard to take the slings and slurs of classmates. A very poignant piece my friend. Well done God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/25/2018 8:42:00 AM
Very deep Harry...
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Date: 11/25/2018 7:34:00 AM
Wow, very powerful poem. Well done Harry! :)
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Date: 11/24/2018 11:51:00 PM
Hi Harry, Awesome, dark, sad but great poem! Was it suicide contemplated by Seth? Your words flow and your poetic skill shines through and within your poem. Kindest regards, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/24/2018 6:28:00 PM
Just read your poem . A very sad one. I think the ideas Constance give us with her fragmented forms inspire us toward darker poetry and i quite like that. i think this is a winner for sure.
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Date: 11/24/2018 6:26:00 PM
So Harry is Five your Path number, like with me? Or is it your destiny? (the sum of ALL your birthdate numbers?)My Destiny is actually 7 but I think 5 resonates so strongly in me for it also being my birth year. It was fun to learn you also have a five
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Date: 11/24/2018 5:19:00 PM
A masterful write by the Master of Verse, Harry! Thanks for sharing it. And many thanks for your kind comments re the Native American. Great to hear from you - Bob
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Date: 11/24/2018 5:03:00 PM
Powerful message...
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Date: 11/24/2018 3:01:00 PM
remarkable poem for the marginalized, harry... this is a keeper, ohh..huggs
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Date: 11/24/2018 8:07:00 AM
Brilliant as usual, who was Seth? xx
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Date: 11/24/2018 2:15:00 AM
Great poetry, I cant put my finger on it, but the lines are magical, well expressed on this topic.
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Date: 11/23/2018 3:02:00 PM
what a powerful write here, my friend - great job for the contest
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Date: 11/23/2018 7:03:00 AM
A great write Harry..some special lines like:He wrote of a premature death A life taken by one’s own hand...and ..So easy to put on a face, when emulating the bard. Best for a win.
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