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Best visits are from loved ones far away. You'll chat and laugh, sometimes from night to dawn! For when they come, you'll pack into one day months or even years of what's been going on. July 27, 2021 For Line Gauthier's Bite Size Poem No21 Poetry Contest

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Date: 8/18/2021 1:36:00 PM
Lovely thoughts, Andrea. Have thought them but never put them into words for posterity. Thanks and kudos on your win.
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Date: 8/18/2021 12:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful write. So True. Times just flies by. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 8/18/2021 9:43:00 AM
Well said Andrea! With these special visits time just flies and there never seems to be enough time to in everything! Congrats and high fives!
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Date: 8/18/2021 3:34:00 AM
Very true ! Fantastic quatrain Andrea, Congratulations on your win !!
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Date: 8/18/2021 3:28:00 AM
Wonderful experience shared. Beautiful lines. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/30/2021 12:27:00 PM
So true and what a lovely feeling of happiness as the day just flows by so quickly, but we have them for some time, so we should enjoy what each day brings. Your poem is a literal exact feeling of how great it is to have overseas family or friends visit. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/29/2021 4:56:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I agree visits from someone that you haven't seen in a long time are the best. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/28/2021 7:52:00 PM
Hello Andrea, 'You'll chat and laugh, sometimes from night to dawn! ' Someone dropped a wonderful spoon for this visit in your poem.
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Date: 7/28/2021 6:59:00 PM
Very lovely, Andrea. Janice
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Date: 7/28/2021 5:27:00 PM
A visit from a relative can be an interesting time of catch up. I hope that when you and your sisters get together that it is a very happy time. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 7/28/2021 4:35:00 PM
So true Andrea, having moved half a world away when 23 with wife and 2 sons.
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Date: 7/28/2021 7:34:00 AM
So true, Andrea... Beautifully said...
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Date: 7/28/2021 5:53:00 AM
Always a joy to unite with loved ones. You said it well, Andrea.
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Date: 7/28/2021 1:25:00 AM
After over a year of isolation (now ended), those family dinners/get-togethers were sorely missed. This poem resonated with me, nice one ..Delice
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Date: 7/27/2021 8:44:00 PM
I haven't had a visit in a very long time , I sure miss them. Well said, Andrea. Good luck in Caren's contest.
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Date: 7/27/2021 7:48:00 PM
Such reunions are rare and are to be memories cherished. Hugs.
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Date: 7/27/2021 4:15:00 PM
certainly time to celebrate when folk are able to meet loved ones and friends and family - I find the differences in pronunciation quite amusing as we don't rhyme on with dawn - on with gone and dawn with drawn lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/27/2021 1:30:00 PM
You packed a lot into a few lines Andrea, those reunions are great for catching up and having a few drinks. Good luck in the contest Tom
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