Best Man

Ring, ring goes my telephone,
I move to the front door of the house
I rent to own 
I am moving slow,
stoned,
alone, 
I stroll,
miserable!!!

The call came a few hours before 
from a dear friend of mine 
forewarning me of the grime,
dirty shards ripping, crippling my inner core.

I saw them together at the grocery store.
Discombobulated, my shirt smells of pine,
weighted, my heart begins to whine,
My best man, my girl. A romance so hard to ignore.

Jared Pickett
5/6/2010
Asavvy1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 2, 2012 at 5:56 AM
I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Jared. Love and best wishes always, Carol
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May 16, 2010 at 4:07 PM
Mr JP, This poem makes me sad because you saw your best man and girl together at the grocery store. I can't imagine a girl choosing someone else. Wonderful poem. Scarlett
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May 11, 2010 at 8:19 PM
SOUP MAIL....
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May 10, 2010 at 10:14 AM
Hope this is fiction. .very deep and sad. .Ow that bestman needs a hit with a pan. :). .Charma
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May 8, 2010 at 1:44 PM
Mr Pickett, Your soup mail had a server error. I sent you a soup mail with my email address. Thank you. Scarlett
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May 6, 2010 at 9:34 AM
I'm sorry if this is a true story...very nice poem...Scarlett
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May 6, 2010 at 9:11 AM
There are sure some tacky people..though it may hurt..your better off without them, trust me...Thnx for the honor of choosing Jimmy's and my poem in the contest...This Sestina is a mighty challenge...but very stimulating...Peace and love, Audrey
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May 6, 2010 at 8:47 AM
It happens more often than not Jared and its never easy to deal with .. perfect words to tell your tale... SOUP MAIL... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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