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Beneath Your Beautiful Branches

Slowly, gracefully your leaves dance in the early morning breeze, gold edges winking seductively as they pirouette past reaching limbs. Like blazing dreams they mesmerize me as the sun glimmers silver against the mazarine sky, teasing me as they tickle past. Fragrant petals glitter waking sunlight that slowly dries the dew upon the delicate stamen lashes in your compassionate blue eyes. Bright and gentle, they watch as the shadows creep slowly through the forest gazing upon each tiny detail, the changing hues, each movement, and me. I can feel them watch me, caress me and, sometimes angry, burn me, but as quickly, your bud drips its viscous nectar to cool the seething flames and you quiver your branches in chiding whispers of reproaching laughter as I sulk like a child enveloped in your caring, calming, airy shade. I lean against your smooth lovely bark and you soothe me. Long and tall reaching to touch the pillows at the tender feet of heaven, your slender leafy fingertips spread above me shading my heavy, moist brow. Though older than I your timeless wisdom entices and allures me. Oh beautiful gentle tree, how easily could I love you. 03/18/17

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Date: 9/6/2017 3:00:00 PM
"and you quiver your branches in chiding whispers of reproaching laughter"...love that line among many in this poem, James. I also really like, " your bud drips its viscous nectar to cool the seething flames" This was excellent. My favorite so far from what I have read from you. Will have to explore more of your work soon! Always, Laura
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James Inman
Date: 9/7/2017 7:05:00 AM
Laura, thank you for spending so much time with me and for all of your lovely comments. Your visits are always welcome.
Date: 4/16/2017 8:27:00 PM
Wonderful writing James, magnificent imagery and word choices. a7
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James Inman
Date: 4/16/2017 10:15:00 PM
John, I appreciate your great comment, thank you.
Date: 4/11/2017 10:12:00 AM
You excel in this style James. The genuine love, respect and care is akin to a most sacred human love affair that few experience and most only dream of. You captured its essence with beauty and grace. Exquisite writing. a fave, 7+
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James Inman
Date: 4/11/2017 10:41:00 AM
Thank you Lynn, in many ways it is a dream. I believe that even with the most vivid of imaginations a hint of reality is needed to create strong feelings in writing. You have to live those feelings to be able to recreate them. In most cases they are unrequited fantasies, so, though the emotions are real, the relations are quite often not.
Date: 3/26/2017 3:36:00 PM
James what a beautiful poem you have penned, I loved it ~
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James Inman
Date: 4/11/2017 10:19:00 AM
BW, I just saw your comment. Please forgive me for missing it and thank you so much.
Date: 3/19/2017 3:20:00 PM
wowowow, this is amazing, Ralph. This is the kind of poetry that could win a contest about trees. I once entered such a contest and do not recall any of the winners being as fine as this one. Trees are a bit like people. I think they can sense things. I was going out to my baby walnut tree all last summer coaxing it to grow (I am so afraid this transplanted tree might die and I want badly to have its walnuts in the future) a fave for this gem.
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James Inman
Date: 3/21/2017 6:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea. I hope your Walnut tree is doing well. I remember how excited you were when you got it.
Date: 3/18/2017 10:02:00 PM
So very beautiful. One almost wishes the tree would like on life and become a loving partner. Great use of imagery
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James Inman
Date: 3/18/2017 10:38:00 PM
Thank you Eileen. Love the new Avatar.
Date: 3/18/2017 7:15:00 PM
I love personification of trees. You really portray a relationship with them.
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James Inman
Date: 3/18/2017 7:54:00 PM
Thank you. Yeah, some of my most important relationships have been with trees. : )

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