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Beneath the Surface

If you will take the time to look What you are gonna see This sure and strong exterior Isn't really me A fragile little girl Left to find her way Facing new challenges Each and everyday Life's not always fair As scary as that seems This little girl looked hard enough To finally reach her dreams The journey that led her to her purpose Is the pain found deep... Beneath The Surface

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Date: 5/22/2016 5:40:00 PM
Valeria, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*"
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Date: 11/1/2011 6:27:00 PM
nice rythtm flow to this peice...love the way it paints the picture of a determined young one. -Jasmine
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