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Beneath the Falls

Long red tresses softly fall Upon my naked shoulders. As I step into the stream, Your smile beckons me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/8/2011 3:51:00 PM
You must like the water a lot! A fine example of a dodoitsu.
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Date: 12/31/2010 10:06:00 AM
She exits the stream, do my eyes softly dream. Her body wringing, her wet dress clinging, hearts resonating, soon they'll be singing. Beautiful images emerge from your words Francine....:)
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Date: 12/30/2010 8:14:00 PM
hot hot hot. All the best if for the contest.
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Date: 12/30/2010 6:47:00 PM
Super lines Francine.. good luck in Michael;s part of the "SPICY" contest my friend.. appreciate u supporting our endeavors on the Soup with luv..
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