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Francine Roberts

Beneath the Falls

Long red tresses softly fall

   Upon my naked shoulders.

As I step into the stream,
  
    Your smile beckons me.

Copyright © Francine Roberts | Year Posted 2010

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January 8, 2011 at 3:51 PM

You must like the water a lot! A fine example of a dodoitsu.

December 31, 2010 at 10:06 AM

She exits the stream, do my eyes softly dream. Her body wringing, her wet dress clinging, hearts resonating, soon they'll be singing. Beautiful images emerge from your words Francine....:)

December 30, 2010 at 8:14 PM

hot hot hot. All the best if for the contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 30, 2010 at 6:47 PM

Super lines Francine.. good luck in Michael;s part of the "SPICY" contest my friend.. appreciate u supporting our endeavors on the Soup with luv..

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