Beneath the Blue Sky

On a lovely clear day at a county fair, 
the balloons were all ready to take to the air. 
We watched as the burner flames flickered up high, 
then passengers boarded and waved us goodbye. 
The balloons all ascended and finally took flight. 
In vibrant striped colors, a rainbow delight. 
Propelled by wind currents they gracefully fly, 
like sailboats at sea beneath the blue sky. 
From wicker gondolas gazing down on the land, 
their magical trip will no doubt be grand. 
With the sun on their face and wind through their hair, 
in a hot air balloon, how I wish I was there.

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Date: 3/16/2023 7:25:00 AM
- to "fly" in a hot air balloon is one of my "big wishes" ... a wonderful poem, Anne :) - hugs
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Date: 3/16/2023 3:57:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine and have a lovely evening. Hugs ~ Anne :-)
Date: 3/15/2023 2:33:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem, Anne. The writing is so smooth, you can almost see yourself floating along with the colorful balloons. Thanks for your uplifting comment on my page
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Date: 3/15/2023 3:54:00 PM
Thank you so much Sotto. Much appreciated my friend :-)
Date: 3/3/2023 2:48:00 PM
Love this, Anne, you take this reader there, All the best..Harry
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Date: 3/4/2023 4:59:00 AM
Thank you Harry :-) Its great to see you back on P.S. I hope you are recovered and feeling better? Hugs ~ Anne :-)
Date: 3/2/2023 8:01:00 PM
Very descriptive and wonderfully penned Anne! I haven't seen a hot air balloon in far too many years, but you brought my memories right back to me from decades ago. So fun, pretty, and free spirited! Such a joyful poem :)
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Date: 3/3/2023 4:17:00 AM
Thank you BJ. It's been awhile since I've seen them too. And yes, they're so pretty to see :-)
Date: 2/28/2023 3:52:00 PM
Such a lovely poem, Anne. The words flow and you almost feel like you're in one of the beautiful balloons!
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Date: 3/3/2023 4:11:00 AM
Thank you Ann, I've never been in one but they are amazing to watch. Enjoy your weekend my friend:-)
Date: 2/28/2023 10:43:00 AM
Anne, your poem is wonderfully penned and is delightful to read, so visual, I love watching the hot air balloons going by, blessings, Constance
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Date: 3/3/2023 4:06:00 AM
Thank you for your visit Constance and your kind feedback :-)
Date: 2/23/2023 3:07:00 PM
Beautifully composed, Anne. Flows effortlessly. A joy to read. It left me smiling:)
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Date: 2/23/2023 4:46:00 PM
Thank you so much for your visit Daniel and your kind feedback. I'm happy it left you smiling :-)
Date: 2/21/2023 7:16:00 AM
Nicely done Anne! I feel I'm with them there. :)
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Date: 2/22/2023 8:15:00 PM
Thank you Linda :-)
Date: 2/20/2023 9:31:00 AM
i used to watch weekends for them....how i longed to join them...loved this poem for its enthusiasm
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Date: 2/20/2023 11:39:00 AM
Thank you Timothy:-) I've never been in a hot air balloon but hope to try it out one day. Enjoy your day my friend
Date: 2/18/2023 7:43:00 PM
Thanks for bringing a welcome perspective back to the word 'balloon!' ~ Gershon
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Date: 2/19/2023 5:47:00 PM
Thank you Gershon :-) Oh for sure these types of balloon's are definitely a welcome sight in our skies. I hope you had a good weekend?
Date: 2/15/2023 5:34:00 PM
i love this, i did hot air balloon too.
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Date: 2/16/2023 5:20:00 AM
Thank you Andrea :-) The contest inspired me.
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