Beneath a Winter Moon

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Bite Bite Size Contest No. 78 * Sponsor: Line Gauthier

December 8, 2023

There's a graying in the morning sky Soon snowfall will cover hills and fields A perfect setting for this holiday season Winter white glowing 'neath a silver moon Waiting for the sounds of children's laughter

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/8/2023 2:46:00 PM

your descriptions are eloquent and perfect. I liked 'winter white glowing...' Nicely done, Lin. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Lin Lane
Date: 12/17/2023 1:55:00 AM

Thanks Sara.

Deb M

Date: 12/8/2023 12:39:00 PM

Its sounds magical Lin…..lovely poem! Debx

Lin Lane
Date: 12/17/2023 1:54:00 AM

Thank you, Deb.

Daniel Turner

Date: 12/8/2023 11:37:00 AM

I see it effortlessly, Lin:) Soft as that snowfall.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/17/2023 1:54:00 AM

Thank you, Danny.

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 12/8/2023 10:02:00 AM

A beautiful description of a winter moon. Well written.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/8/2023 10:10:00 AM

Hi, Jeanette. Thank you for such gracious remarks on my write.