Beneath a Hazy Pink Sky

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The first
close-up of Mars      was 1996  since then-
a flotilla of  fly-bys   orbiters     landers     and rovers

fourth planet from the Sun
    roman God of war it is called

always the question    is Mars  habitable for living life
key to existence    water    is there water on Mars
could living creatures still exist 
perhaps    WE    will become    life on Mars

a continual chain of explorations      finding new discoveries
polar ice caps
     drifting clouds in its atmosphere
         seasonal weather patterns
                huge volcanoes  the size of Arizona
       canyons     and proof of former flooding

it is rocky and cold        and dry    with a-
a hazy pink sky     (that seems beautiful to me)

is Mars habitable for humans
the Curiosity Mars science laboratory
rover is on   a  bold  exploration       of discovery
for science
     for technology
             to find answers to questions and questions        

did you know you could send 
             a postcard to Curiosity

the future holds promise      with the launch in 2020
of a robotic science rover      seeking life
all part of the Mars exploration
program    to address the key question
      the potential for life on Mars

And why 2020 you ask
well     that is when Earth and Mars are 
     in the most advantageous positions of orbit

but for me there is another key question
would I-

     leave this beautiful place of Earth
                                       for a unknown existence
on a planet rocky    cold    dry    with volcanoes erupting

but oh
     something about that hazy pink sky    beckons

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June 22, 2015


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Date: 7/27/2015 1:19:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write BW! Brilliant work!
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Date: 7/26/2015 11:51:00 PM
Yes, BW, how a powerful romance can overwhelm common sense. Great write, well done. Viv x ps- I like to think that behind that rock where the rover will not go is an abandoned shopping trolley.
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Date: 7/26/2015 4:52:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**
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Date: 7/26/2015 12:18:00 PM
so so creative Broken Wings - love the imagery and the image - congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/26/2015 11:02:00 AM
Beautiful descriptive write congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/24/2015 12:06:00 PM
meant to add your flow is exceptionable!
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Date: 6/24/2015 12:05:00 PM
Enjoyed your take on Mars!! A lot of much speculation is that the Martians live there are underground now! We may already be there if the rumors are true of a secret space program!
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Date: 6/23/2015 9:47:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping..I don't think that traveling to Mars is in my future..That is unless, lets me fly by on the way into glory..Sara
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Date: 6/23/2015 7:33:00 AM
I think I will stay here where it is warm. I enjoyed your exploration.
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Date: 6/23/2015 7:31:00 AM
Broken Wings, love the title and the very descriptive poem.. always good flow!!! =)~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 6/23/2015 2:22:00 AM
Powerful well described, this is beautiful and excellently penned for the contest. Good luck.........A.M.
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Date: 6/22/2015 6:45:00 PM
Interesting and creative work. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 6/22/2015 5:49:00 PM
Indeed, that hazy pink sky beckons from afar. Your word choices are clever, descriptive, and imaginative. Emile.
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Date: 6/22/2015 2:08:00 PM
and i would love to see how pink that spot is , constance... delicate way to describe this planet.. well done and congrats on your win in my contest!.. huggs
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Date: 6/22/2015 11:53:00 AM
Something about that hazy pink sky beckons...awesome. Your write breeds curiosity and planetary awe! :-)
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Date: 6/22/2015 11:09:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem!! I loved it!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D
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