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The first close-up of Mars was 1996 since then- a flotilla of fly-bys orbiters landers and rovers fourth planet from the Sun roman God of war it is called always the question is Mars habitable for living life key to existence water is there water on Mars could living creatures still exist perhaps WE will become life on Mars a continual chain of explorations finding new discoveries polar ice caps drifting clouds in its atmosphere seasonal weather patterns huge volcanoes the size of Arizona canyons and proof of former flooding it is rocky and cold and dry with a- a hazy pink sky (that seems beautiful to me) is Mars habitable for humans the Curiosity Mars science laboratory rover is on a bold exploration of discovery for science for technology to find answers to questions and questions did you know you could send a postcard to Curiosity the future holds promise with the launch in 2020 of a robotic science rover seeking life all part of the Mars exploration program to address the key question the potential for life on Mars And why 2020 you ask well that is when Earth and Mars are in the most advantageous positions of orbit but for me there is another key question would I- leave this beautiful place of Earth for a unknown existence on a planet rocky cold dry with volcanoes erupting but oh something about that hazy pink sky beckons ______________________________ June 22, 2015 Free Verse For the contest, Subject Mars, sponsor, Joe Maverick Third Place

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Date: 7/27/2015 1:19:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write BW! Brilliant work!
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Date: 7/26/2015 11:51:00 PM
Yes, BW, how a powerful romance can overwhelm common sense. Great write, well done. Viv x ps- I like to think that behind that rock where the rover will not go is an abandoned shopping trolley.
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Date: 7/26/2015 4:52:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**
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Date: 7/26/2015 12:18:00 PM
so so creative Broken Wings - love the imagery and the image - congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/26/2015 11:02:00 AM
Beautiful descriptive write congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/24/2015 12:06:00 PM
meant to add your flow is exceptionable!
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Date: 6/24/2015 12:05:00 PM
Enjoyed your take on Mars!! A lot of much speculation is that the Martians live there are underground now! We may already be there if the rumors are true of a secret space program!
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Date: 6/23/2015 9:47:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping..I don't think that traveling to Mars is in my future..That is unless, lets me fly by on the way into glory..Sara
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Date: 6/23/2015 7:33:00 AM
I think I will stay here where it is warm. I enjoyed your exploration.
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Date: 6/23/2015 7:31:00 AM
Broken Wings, love the title and the very descriptive poem.. always good flow!!! =)~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 6/23/2015 2:22:00 AM
Powerful well described, this is beautiful and excellently penned for the contest. Good luck.........A.M.
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Date: 6/22/2015 6:45:00 PM
Interesting and creative work. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 6/22/2015 5:49:00 PM
Indeed, that hazy pink sky beckons from afar. Your word choices are clever, descriptive, and imaginative. Emile.
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Date: 6/22/2015 2:08:00 PM
and i would love to see how pink that spot is , constance... delicate way to describe this planet.. well done and congrats on your win in my contest!.. huggs
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Date: 6/22/2015 11:53:00 AM
Something about that hazy pink sky beckons...awesome. Your write breeds curiosity and planetary awe! :-)
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Date: 6/22/2015 11:09:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem!! I loved it!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D
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