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Below the Still

Summer morning, warm with no wind. The bay waters are calm. Small boats settle like ducks incubating their own reflections. Yet everything is just a thin membrane of order pulled tight over a seething chaos that boils just below the still. Something is hidden, kept from sight by a lull smeared across the gentle float and lap of lazy thoughts. A trip wire is stretched somewhere in the shadows of a familiar path waiting for a foot.

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Date: 1/15/2023 6:17:00 PM
an ominous feeling lurking in the still. Nicely written Paul, drew me in, held me and left me thinking...
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Paul Willason
Date: 1/16/2023 1:43:00 AM
Hopefully doesn’t strike a too sinister note, more an observation on the forces, both natural and other, that are always present and can break through. Very much appreciate yr comments John. Regards, Paul

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