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Below the Still

Summer morning, 
warm with no wind.
The bay waters are calm. 
Small boats settle like ducks
incubating their own reflections. 
Yet everything is just a thin 
membrane of order
pulled tight over a seething
chaos that boils just below the still.
Something is hidden, kept
from sight by a lull 
smeared across the gentle float 
and lap of lazy thoughts.
A trip wire is stretched 
somewhere in the shadows 
of a familiar path waiting
for a foot.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lawless Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 6:17 PM
an ominous feeling lurking in the still. Nicely written Paul, drew me in, held me and left me thinking...
Willason Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 1:43 AM
Hopefully doesn’t strike a too sinister note, more an observation on the forces, both natural and other, that are always present and can break through. Very much appreciate yr comments John. Regards, Paul
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