Belly Fat

I really think that where I’m at is getting rid of belly fat For if it doesn’t go away a ‘diet doc’ I’ll have to pay Long lists of foods that I can’t eat potato chips and choc’late treats Raw veggies, fruits, no processed foods asparagus to kill my mood But never fear, I’ll reach my goal ~ eliminate my jelly roll ~ Iambic Tetrameter ~

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Terry Miller

Date: 4/6/2022 8:04:00 AM

I see you are on a roll Gershon, a very funny poem.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/6/2022 8:14:00 AM

Not only am I on a roll, I AM a roll. Thanks, Terry! ~ Roly Poly

Valsa George

Date: 4/5/2022 8:56:00 PM

Getting rid of belly fat requires rigorous discipline ..... ! Not quite easy ! Still as the saying goes- 'If there is a will, there is a way' ! So well written, Gershon !

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/6/2022 8:15:00 AM

I hope that the 'will' is not my 'Last Will & Testament!' lol, though actually not-so-funny at my age and weight... ~ Roly-Poly

Indiana Shaw

Date: 4/5/2022 8:26:00 PM

Limit yourself to a 3" plate, that should do the trick . . . ; )

Indiana Shaw
Date: 4/6/2022 8:28:00 AM

Darn . . .

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/5/2022 8:33:00 PM

"Pile the cold cuts high. Customers should see salami coming through the rye!" ~ Courtesy of the late, great Alan Sherman

Jeff Kyser

Date: 4/5/2022 7:11:00 PM

I think if you trim down to iambic hexameter, you can get those last few pounds off! Footles, well, that might be a bit much! :-)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/5/2022 8:41:00 PM

I actually was thinking of going for iambic sexameter, though I normally don't mix business with pleasure... :)