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Written for Kim Rodrigues Bells poetry contest.

 

Bells

Suspended high up the tower, 
I hang out of sight.
My shiny golden brass core is hollow,
but I have a big mouth with a bell as a tongue.

Sometimes pigeons visit, resting on my arch,
but fly away leaving their droppings behind.
Don't pity me for my loneliness and silence,
as this serenity never lasts.
When the cloaked man arrives and pulls at my rope
he breaks the peace with deafening sounds.

Each tug hammers against my cup shaped sides,
belching vibrating echoes across the lands.
In an enchanting melody that brings joy to most,
but distress to some -
who only hear me as shrills and shrieks.

I love my ding dongs,
be it to tell the time,
or for funerals, weddings or as a call to prayer -
I'm content in ringing all day long!
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Rodrigues Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 9:34 AM
I loved: Each tug hammers against my cup shaped sides, belching vibrating echoes across the lands. Great imagery, Silent!
George Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 7:14 PM
"Don't pity me for my loneliness and silence, as this serenity never lasts. When the cloaked man arrives and pulls at my rope he breaks the peace with deafening sounds." So sweet. A brilliant personification which no body must have conceived of doing! Perfect.....in every way !
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 4:07 PM
Hello silent One, I enjoy the sounds of the bells. they have a cheery sound. Accept for the funerals. My friend. Enjoy your evening. /Darlene/
Parker Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 3:50 PM
it's poetry to see a creative mind at work
Herrick Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 3:31 PM
Is an esteemed maiden. If it isn't then don't ruin it for me. Lol I love the shape of the bell in the photo. She is gorgeous.
Herrick Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 3:28 PM
I like how she has form and voice, like a White Witch Banshee, silver tongued. Her calls echoing to the land, she calls to ceremony in cascade of importance, rung for matrimony and herself a Gargoyle sung of Matriarchy, Prodigy. This was the rich flavor this b rang. I am gonna get a cup of coffee and pour over it. Let it brew. Plus, I love bells. They are one of the most majestic of all instruments and the Angels, who have music in their very being know this. I think that is why the word Belle
Baker Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 3:12 PM
Excellent Personification poetry, Silent One, a good entry for the contest. They're some good lessons within, be patient enjoy what we do, don't let the small stuff (pun intended) bother us. Bells Rock! (literally). Good to see you entering some contest, my friend. Thanks for all the recent comments on my poetry, Bill
Kauffman Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 1:49 PM
SO, your words ring with whimsy, joy, delight and a few tears as your avian friends leave reminders of their visits! Great personification. When I read one of your poems, simple or complex, I am amazed. Simple poet - never. Poetic artist - YES! So glad Inky wrote her tribute to you. You selflessly share the breadth of your talent, inspirations, encouragement. Your words ring like your bells on PS! I feel so blessed every time I receive one of your emails! Best wishes. Blessings!
Rose  Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 1:37 PM
I love my ding dongs too, but mine are sweet, I never thought about doing a personification on it, that was very smart of you, gl in the contest S. :)
Elliott Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 1:31 PM
A grand personification poem on bells, Silent One. Your genius use of words and verse shine again. My very best wishes for the contest with such a worthy contender poem. Warmest wishes. ~
Poet Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 1:07 PM
Exceptional personification, my friend; what a moving, expressive, and intelligent work, filled to the brim with nuanced creativity. You imbued the bell with emotions that resonated throughout each stanza. Best of success with the contest. You possess a linguistic ability that is at once tender and profound.
Pandit Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 12:09 PM
Superb personification, my friend. You gave the bell feelings that resound from every stanza.
Edmonds  Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 11:49 AM
Love this poem titled Bells. As we live not far from the local parish church we get to hear the bells ring, for bell ringing practise every Thursday evening, for weddings and calls to church on Sundays. We love it. All the best for the contest Silent One, though somehow I don’t think you need it, it’s a winner to me… Belle
Empress Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 11:42 AM
Wow personification on bells! Who would have thought of writing one? Not me. And I haven’t seen anyone try too. Im in absolute awe, and i guess people who read my comments to you will get tired of me saying this haha but i seriously cant even! This is of of the best for the contest in my opinion. I especially love “ Don't pity me for my loneliness and silence,“ wow! “ but distress to some - who only hear me as shrills and shrieks.” amazing!!! And that ending! “ I love my ding dongs,” so cute!!
Empress Avatar
December 8, 2023 at 11:42 AM
Fave for me and you’ve nailed it!!!!
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