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Being Shod

A warm Spring's fragrant wind lifts leaf shadows as, molten metal sizzles from the sudden wet plunge A farrier holds firm the muddy fetlock while on three legs a plough horse stands, docile beneath the hammer blows A brown eye shines and gently shuts- he lets a practised hand glide over sweat-stained withers that wiggle when a fly lands The first foot falls- a soft snort from a velvet muzzle as he lifts the other to be shod Soft hooves becoming, iron clad For the contest, Any Poem, sponsor, Broken Wings must appear on poem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/8/2013 9:29:00 AM
I've never shod a horse but this is wonderful and gives me insight. lvoe, Kathy
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Date: 12/1/2013 7:51:00 AM
Your images are fantastic. I am constantly amazed at your talent for filling your poems with vibrant life.
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Date: 11/30/2013 12:51:00 PM
the imagery drew me in and I could plainly see everything that you wrote... nice choice of wording as well; keen observation of a glimpse of spring, SuZ...huggs
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