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Being Logical About Mistakes

Picture a blank chalkboard Like the ones you see in schools Then think of it as your life On the day you were born In your mind, take a piece of chalk And start to draw a straight line That line is the path of your life Now think of your first remembered mistake At that point your line must veer off course From that point on, the rest of your life Never follows that original line Every choice we make will alter our direction A poor choice will be a dramatic change And take your farther away Where as a good choice will take you closer To the original line but never get you back to that straight line We may travel parallel from time to time But then you must consider the fact That choices are made everyday Meaning, with every choice our line will Veer one way or the other Each choice leads to another choice Since none of us are perfect We will all make our share of poor choices Therefore, it is my opinion That our worst mistake is our first mistake Which leads us away from that straight line When we make choices we do not always know The immediate result, sometimes the true Result may not show up for days, weeks or even years Life is about the choices we make They should never be taken lightly As each choice is a turn to a different path for contest July 1 2016

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Date: 9/4/2016 2:42:00 AM
Very well written. And I guess we are meant to stray from the path and our mistakes can be our best friends...
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Daniel Turner
Date: 9/8/2016 11:52:00 AM
...or our worst enemies. Yes, our Maker knew too well we would stray from our path. Theologically speaking that is why Jesus died. I appreciate your friendly visits Mrs Kai. I went to school with a guy named Kai. He was named after the famous jazz musician Kai Winding. So naturally, I love your name:)
Date: 8/10/2016 1:37:00 PM
Superbly written, I love the meticulous detail and pondering your words inspire, the theme of "choices" is a fave of mine... creatively penned, an absolute pleasure to read. blessings, lynn
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Date: 8/10/2016 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Lynn. I appreciate the fact that you like this write as I seldom if ever write free verse. I also believe there is no such thing as a small choice. Like it says every choice leads to another.
Date: 7/1/2016 4:43:00 AM
I like your description of the true facts of life - "That our worst mistake is our first mistake Which leads us away from that straight line" "Life is about the choices we make":)
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Date: 7/1/2016 7:27:00 AM
Yes it is and I am happy you made the choice to stop by and read. I always appreciate your kindness and your insight. Have a super weekend.
Date: 6/30/2016 5:57:00 PM
I really liked your poem.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 6/30/2016 6:02:00 PM
Thank you, Pam. I appreciate your support and friendly visit.
Date: 6/30/2016 3:19:00 PM
Love your poem, Daniel. It is so full of wisdom about the paths of life we take and the mistakes that lead us astray even if we do not know it at the time. I would put it in the contest! :) 7 Sandra
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Daniel Turner
Date: 6/30/2016 4:07:00 PM
Mrs Sandra, I'm almost certain this is not what she had in mind. Sometimes my brain takes me to strange places. I tend to overthink things too much I appreciate the vote of confidence and always look forward to your visits.
Date: 6/30/2016 2:34:00 PM
Everything you've said, rings true. Mistakes can almost become like a tangled web, that can either teach us, or tie us to a life of regret. Let us hope we've learned along the way. Nicely said ! :)
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Date: 6/30/2016 2:52:00 PM
Thank you Mrs Carrie. Making the right choice is usually very painful. Poor choices usually offer instant gratification but always have consequences whereas the correct choice we generally have to have patience. I always am grateful for your visits. Have a blessed day!
Date: 6/30/2016 12:18:00 PM
how insightful and wonderfully quilled, daniel.. have a greeat life!..huggs
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Date: 6/30/2016 1:04:00 PM
Thank you, nette. I always welcome your friendliness and flattering comments.
Date: 6/30/2016 11:02:00 AM
very interesting, daniel! i like what you've said here and especially the way you've expressed it...
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Daniel Turner
Date: 6/30/2016 1:03:00 PM
Thank you Ilene. I appreciate the support and am always happy to see your beautiful smiling icon.

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