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Behind the North Room Door

A chill drifted past the staircase lingered then dissipated; while the rustic oil lamp flickered, hesitating to die. Gasping to calm emotions, before feelings of faint overpower wit. A continuous bumping in the lulling darkness sends an anxious heart racing, with a pulsating echo in the still night. Shadows appear in the faint light, jutting sporadically, lunging in a haze of blindness. Closed eyes make visions vanish; only for a suspended moment. To glimpse the whisper from the north room; would satisfy curiosity; possibly. With humidity high and gelid, no one dare enter the isolated space. A heavy stomping, something sliding from behind the closet door. A sudden moan like a lost whale in a vast sea. Like a dying breath gasping, something pawing, clawing; then no more. In the murky, dank midst of solemn surroundings, solitude submits; flinging the door open. Shall defiance capture fears remotely of the unknown, driving consternations amid reality. Take a step, feel the anticipation of pure anonymous deception. Enter at will, obscurity awaits dreadful clandestine to the weary. The oil light dances and dies leaving the north room door ajar. Copyright © 2006 By Caryl S. Muzzey Eighth Place Winner ~ "Your deepest darkest poem” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer March 22, 2013

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Date: 2/26/2013 10:50:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 2/24/2013 9:53:00 PM
Caryl... congratulations with your awesome deep and darken poem* GOODNIGHT!!! xox~LINDA
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Date: 1/11/2010 11:33:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive write in this one. I especially like the line "A sudden moan like a whale lost in a vast sea". Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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