Behind the Barn

belly hanging down over beer cans strewn everywhere

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Deb M

Date: 3/9/2024 11:02:00 PM

Is that you every weekend BB?? Fun write my friend…Debx

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 3/7/2024 11:58:00 AM

GW: Good one! Sounds like that feller has a very serious case of DUNLOPS disease. (His belly has done lopped over his belt!) For the record, as a youth, I didn't drink beer behind the barn but I did smoke corn silk cigarettes! Bob H

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/7/2024 8:27:00 PM

So, I take it that you drank beer IN FRONT of the barn. lol. Thanks, Bob.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/7/2024 7:19:00 AM

What a sight, Beer Belly Bob!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/7/2024 8:28:00 PM

ha, ha, ha, ha, ha. ~ Jelly Roll Morton

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2024 4:16:00 AM

A sight to behold, I'm sure. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/7/2024 8:33:00 PM

Some like it hot. Some like the fat. lol. Thanks for your visits to my site, Sara.