Beginnings

Virgin ears...
catch the gentle scrape
of nylon against nylon

Virgin eyes...
catch a flash of garter
Right knee over left
The simple motion
of legs crossing

She catches him looking
She glances down 
then glances back up

Pouting, sultry expression:
tugging her lower lip
she smiles…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 5, 2015 at 1:57 PM
Tim, Congratulations :) On your wonderful Honorable Mention. ~SKAT~
Eastman Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 9:07 AM
Perfectly written... Well done!
A. Sharma Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 3:45 AM
Subtly beautiful Tim! Congrats on big win!
Richards Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 2:33 PM
Innocence soon lost? a come hither look in her eyes, is asking for trouble !!! Good one, Tim !!
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 6:48 PM
Now this one I GET. And I LIKE IT A LOT!!
Van Breda Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 2:31 PM
Hi Tim Love this piece... simple/sensual and "sultry" ~~x~~
La France Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 12:58 PM
Tim, a great example of sensual without vulgarity, very nice A7 and thanks for visiting my poem, something not quite right, yes so many lost souls in the world . . .
La France Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 1:03 PM
Oh Tim you are very perceptive, it is my brother, he was diagnosed at 14 years old and his life has been a struggle. At the moment he is taking his medicine but that could change in a flash . . .
Manassian Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 3:47 PM
oh wow, Tim...this is a sizzling sultry piece. Good luck in Justin's contest....can to name who that young innocent one ways? ;)
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 1:09 PM
ooh this is beautifully sensual - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7
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