Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- Begging Sunlight -

A yellow song about autumn
Leaves falling slowly 
May nature embrace me gently

Birds mixing tunes 
Of such ecstatic sound 
Rising a sweet melody 
Creeds and song carried with the wind
in the highest tempo

Kissing one heart priceless gold
Crossing bridges and mountain majesty of the world
Rustling softly breathless whispers treasure
Most quiet need, by autumn sun and candlelight

Like sweet thoughts in a dream
Dazzling of wonder as magical charms
floating flutters gently on a breeze 
Delightful day it is for all who dwell
delicately blown upon warm sunlight rays 

The sumptuous yearning of summer that left
Breathtaking feeling dance circles around
Viewing elements and seasons as they change
Deeply touches embracing beauty inside 
Into the dawn's early and tender caresses
You stand in front of the sun 
morning dewdrops upon your vision 




Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)  16.10.2015 
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Funom Makama December 5, 2015 at 9:12 AM What a lovely poem! Spectacular and mind romancing. A 7 and an excellent share Anne-Lise Andresen December 5, 2015 at 10:56 AM Date: 11/6/2015 12:40:00 - Thanks Funom, for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath November 6, 2015 at 9:08 AM A beautiful autumn song like filled with beautiful colors and silence. 7 my lovely lovely friend. Loved always,bl Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2015 at 12:44 PM - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, dear friend Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama October 30, 2015 at 8:00 AM splendid``` great``` beautiful``` awesome and well expressed. As always, beautiful lines from a creative mind. Definitely a 7 Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2015 at 12:40 PM - Thanks Funom, for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley October 28, 2015 at 2:45 PM Fantastic collaboration my friends. Every stanza great and the whole is awesome! Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2015 at 3:55 PM - Thank you, very much appreciate your words, Robert - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort October 19, 2015 at 6:04 PM You manage to bring in visions and sounds from near and far to make something beautiful to think upon. Almost like a magic fountain are you. Anne-Lise Andresen October 20, 2015 at 3:47 AM - We spend far too much time to think about "bad" thing ..... we need to use live to see and enjoy the beauty around us - thanks for the visits and lovely comments, Duke - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edlynn Nau October 19, 2015 at 2:29 PM Love the ride through summer here and the imagery! Favorite is the entire last stanza. Lovely you two! Anne-Lise Andresen October 19, 2015 at 2:31 PM - Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Edlynn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak October 18, 2015 at 7:32 AM Another brilliant collaboration from you and Liam! I especially like the end of the 4th stanza. On fall and winter days, standing in the warm sunlight is joyous. Anne-Lise Andresen October 19, 2015 at 2:31 PM - Monterey, thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dalia Shahein October 17, 2015 at 3:32 PM Very beautiful poem my lovely Anne, great work... Love and hugs :) Anne-Lise Andresen October 18, 2015 at 7:25 AM - Thanks for visiting and comments, Dalia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Tor October 17, 2015 at 2:53 AM Vibrant and alive beautiful duet. Nicely written. Enjoyed written. Anne-Lise Andresen October 18, 2015 at 7:24 AM - Thanks for visiting and comments, Michael :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

CayCay Godwin October 16, 2015 at 11:51 PM Anne Lise and Laim: Like other commenters, I absolutely delighted in your poem. I could feel the sunshine and I welcomed it ... CayCay Anne-Lise Andresen October 18, 2015 at 7:24 AM - Thanks for visiting and comments, CatCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian October 16, 2015 at 11:25 PM Sunshine, I'm enchanted by this beautiful write....simply stunning. You two write so well together. Anne-Lise Andresen October 18, 2015 at 7:24 AM - Thanks for visiting and comments, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Red Barchettadrive October 16, 2015 at 11:22 PM Enjoyed your collab! Anne-Lise Andresen October 18, 2015 at 7:23 AM - Thanks for visiting and comments, Red :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich October 16, 2015 at 8:28 PM this is a really pretty one, you two . Do do DUET!! Anne-Lise Andresen October 18, 2015 at 7:23 AM - Thanks for visiting and comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman October 16, 2015 at 8:24 PM This is wonderful Anne and Liam, truly inspiring. Anne-Lise Andresen October 18, 2015 at 7:23 AM - Thanks for visiting and comments, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid October 16, 2015 at 7:19 PM thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments deeply appreciated wishing you all a lovely week

Liam Mcdaid October 16, 2015 at 7:17 PM truly anne lise your pen dances a golden beautiful tune wishing you a blessed weekend always a great pleasure writing with you pal

Tim Smith October 16, 2015 at 6:01 PM You two write together with a magical pen...lovely Tim Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2015 at 3:02 PM - Thanks for visiting and comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison October 16, 2015 at 3:43 PM you golden words never fail to impress me - such a seasonal delight - outstanding collaboration as ever:-) hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2015 at 3:49 PM - Again (!!!!) , I know exactly what you mean :))))) - Thank you, very much appreciate your words, dear Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick October 16, 2015 at 3:18 PM Enjoyed reading your collaborative work..Good job you two..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2015 at 3:50 PM - Thanks for visiting and comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong October 16, 2015 at 3:15 PM I can tell you inspire each other to write brilliant poetry together! This is such a lovely gift for me to carry with me today as I see the Doctor for another shot in the eye. Poetry helps calm me and your poem is exceptional! Thank you! Blessings, Connie #7 Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2015 at 12:00 PM - Eye surgery ? - Laser shot ? - ..... It goes certainly fine, Connie :) CayCay Godwin October 16, 2015 at 11:49 PM Bless you, Connie - bless you - I know it went well, and I know it is now over - always good when that is over ... CayCay (hope it is okay, Anne Lise, to spontaneously respond to Connie in your box) Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2015 at 3:53 PM - Oh dear ..... - Who is shot in the eye ? ... You ?

Dorian Petersen Potter October 16, 2015 at 1:48 PM Hi Anne Lise n' Liam!A most beautiful, sweet n' captivating love poem inspired by nature, autumn and all, that you've written here my dearest friends.So much beauty in it.Just dazzling!I love it!A very beautiful, sweet piece so full of light and color to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautifully written.I truly enjoyed it!Just awesome!Great imagery!Very enchanting!Excellent piece!Wonderful collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 to each!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2015 at 2:21 PM - A whole bouquet of beautiful words from you, Dorian :) - Thanks for visiting a 7 and comments - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser October 16, 2015 at 1:26 PM I absolutely loved the beauty and imagery of your poem, Anne Lise! It was a pleasure to read and enjoy:) Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2015 at 1:37 PM - A pleasure that you enjoyed our poem: Begging Sunlight - Thanks for visiting and comments, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus October 16, 2015 at 1:10 PM Charmed by this inspired autumn poem that makes us forget the passing away of a lovely summer. I know from experience that a single fine autumn day surpasses many sunny summer days! Well done Anne Lise & Liam! May you have a lovely weekend. // paul Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2015 at 1:13 PM - I am always a bit sad when summer is over :) - thanks for the beautiful comments, Paul - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie October 16, 2015 at 12:57 PM glorious sunlight....so soft, yet so bright....with the cool welcoming breezes blown....ensuring the gift of sunlight is truly known....;) Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2015 at 1:10 PM - Thanks for the friendly words and pleasant visit, Eric :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Miraj Raha October 16, 2015 at 12:45 PM A brilliant collaborated write!!! Autumn sings with both of you. Anne-Lise Andresen October 16, 2015 at 1:34 PM - Miray, thanks for visiting and lovely comment:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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