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Beggars

We are all beggars, are we not? Never enjoying what we get. Whatever we do, a return we expect, Like some traders, we act and react. Life and love and virtue and religion, Anything we will trade for a coin. We are the source of our own miseries, A rise and fall is common in trades. Look at the sun and learn this lesson, He always takes water from the ocean, For returning it in showers elsewhere, Doing it happily, without a fare. Be like a machine for taking and giving, Without expecting anything in return, The more you give, the more will come, Be not a beggar, but be a giver. Won third place in STRAND SELECT any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 1/22/2020 3:46:00 AM
Good philosophy. many of us have enough. And enough means enough.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/22/2020 4:45:00 AM
Thank you for insight Kai..
Date: 1/5/2020 10:03:00 PM
wow excellent poetic expression///
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/5/2020 10:23:00 PM
Thank you Mahtab..
Date: 1/5/2020 3:40:00 PM
Quid pro quo rules. Unfortunately. Great write. Peter
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/5/2020 10:22:00 PM
Thank you Peter..
Date: 1/4/2020 9:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand’s contest. Hugs Eve
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/4/2020 10:39:00 PM
Thank you Eve..
Date: 12/8/2019 7:05:00 AM
Ty for revealing the poverty of ignorance, Jenish! Hearts that are open never receive anything from minds that are closed. This is the wisdom of the ancients. As is this poignant poem. Love and more love always. Romantic Warrior
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/8/2019 9:23:00 AM
Thank you Freddie..
Date: 12/3/2019 7:44:00 AM
nicely done - introspective. I enjoyed reading it.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/3/2019 10:32:00 PM
Thank you for your visit Jon..
Date: 12/1/2019 8:13:00 AM
Wise words. Still we must also be a taker otherwise we deprive another from being a giver.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/1/2019 10:47:00 PM
Taker is ok.. But not a beggar.. lol..
Date: 10/27/2019 1:34:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem, Jenish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 10/27/2019 1:56:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 10/24/2019 1:44:00 AM
Very interesting write, Jenish, we do take advantage of what we can get if given and our earth gives plenty . We need to be sensitive to its needs and give back And also to humanity . Great poem with great flow and emotion.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 10/24/2019 2:31:00 AM
Thank you Eve..
Date: 10/23/2019 1:15:00 PM
Very nicely written! A huge learning we have to do, don't we?
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 10/23/2019 11:31:00 PM
Yes..Thank you visiting..

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