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You make my eyes light up like the sun. You make me cry of just pure love. My heart pounds so loud, just like a gun. I smile as you look down from up above. I wear your shirt and hold on tight, saying you'll be home later on tonight. My sweet dreams bring me the treats as sweet as they can seem to be. I wake up and I’m well aware. Suddenly you’re no longer there. A whole year soon passes by before you’re home to hold me as I cry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/4/2016 12:42:00 AM
Hallie Bowns, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry---LINDA
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Date: 8/19/2015 12:59:00 AM
HALLIE, I like this very much SKAT
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Date: 10/17/2009 5:42:00 PM
Lovely, but sad > a warm welcome to the Soup Hallie >> James
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Date: 10/17/2009 7:47:00 AM
True Love!
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Date: 10/17/2009 5:48:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Hallie. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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