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Before NIght Falls

against sapphire sky smatterings of black wings soar. . . shattering twilight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/16/2015 12:43:00 PM
the color is deep
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Date: 3/22/2012 6:08:00 PM
Go Andie GO! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/20/2012 1:45:00 PM
Great last line..Congrats on your win..I could just hear and feel those birds...Sara
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Date: 3/20/2012 8:41:00 AM
congrats on the placement in the contest, Andrea.................~sashi
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Date: 3/19/2012 6:30:00 PM
Congrats to you, Andrea! I picture a sky full of bats. Great imagery. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/19/2012 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's "Ten For" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/19/2012 10:27:00 AM
This is really fantastic,Andrea.Congratulations!
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Date: 3/19/2012 3:26:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS, Andrea!!! :) on your win in Brian's Contest!! Well Done my friend! What a picture of deep colours you've presented. The mind's eye can see it! ...Big Hugggss~Deb~
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Date: 3/19/2012 2:59:00 AM
This is an image that only God could create..absolute perfection in its beauty, Andrea! Glad it placed. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 2/5/2011 10:45:00 AM
Another wonderful write from you!--KASH
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Date: 10/28/2010 4:10:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive..I see from the comments that you won..Seems like I remember this one but I see that I didn't comment..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I appreciate you taking the time to do that..I enjoy watching the swans come head to head and make the heart...I just thought about what if a Swan and a Goose got a little confused..Weird huh..Sara
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Date: 5/12/2010 9:21:00 AM
sounds like a very dreamy entry did you win. Andrea well done on the Haiku, nicely done,..p.d
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Date: 5/6/2010 7:51:00 AM
wow! seriously fabulous haiku. I do not know the image that was used but the one created in my mind's eye is amazing! I had to write you as I LMAO at your comment on my 'desert' poem! thanks for the comment and the smile that still lingers : )) xoxo
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Date: 4/20/2010 11:59:00 AM
Andrea...If I had to pick a favorite line it would be the last one...Whew! (The first and second ain't too shabby either!) Awesome alliteration too... Not surprised it's a winner! - Tim
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Date: 4/14/2010 10:16:00 AM
Hey Andrea, Congratulations on your win in the contest! Enjoy! ....Jimmy
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Date: 4/11/2010 4:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserving poetry's win Andrea. Awesome job on entry. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/11/2010 5:54:00 AM
Three marvellous lines in your Haiku Andrea, congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James
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Date: 4/9/2010 6:50:00 PM
I really like this one. I particularly like the last line. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/9/2010 6:18:00 PM
Do you have a copy of this picture Andie? I would love to see it. Your haiku is very descriptive and I will bet it was a beautiful picture. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Connie
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Date: 4/9/2010 4:12:00 PM
AHH I CAN VISUALIZE THIS... GOOD HAIKU WRITE
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Date: 4/9/2010 2:34:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your winning poem and placement in Raul's contest.. wonderful write and win for u so enjoy my friend..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/9/2010 11:25:00 AM
really like the contrast you put in here, Andrea, you sure are getting the hang of haiku :)! congrats on your win with this one :)
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Date: 4/9/2010 11:02:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul
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Date: 4/8/2010 7:11:00 PM
ohh, sounds dark & cool.my recent poem is not for the contest.im posting the once for it tonight.im just editing it,it's called night boy.i like how you used black wings to portray the night -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/8/2010 2:38:00 PM
This Haiku...I love it..I love the twilight and that sapphire sky..awesome..you described the wings of those birds so well...lovely..Charma
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