Before Night Falls

the color is deep

Go Andie GO! Congrad's Light & Love

Great last line..Congrats on your win..I could just hear and feel those birds...Sara

congrats on the placement in the contest, Andrea.................~sashi

Congrats to you, Andrea! I picture a sky full of bats. Great imagery. Blessings, Rhonda

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's "Ten For" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

This is really fantastic,Andrea.Congratulations!

CONGRATULATIONS, Andrea!!! :) on your win in Brian's Contest!! Well Done my friend! What a picture of deep colours you've presented. The mind's eye can see it! ...Big Hugggss~Deb~

This is an image that only God could create..absolute perfection in its beauty, Andrea! Glad it placed. Love, Gwendolen

Another wonderful write from you!--KASH

Very descriptive and expressive..I see from the comments that you won..Seems like I remember this one but I see that I didn't comment..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I appreciate you taking the time to do that..I enjoy watching the swans come head to head and make the heart...I just thought about what if a Swan and a Goose got a little confused..Weird huh..Sara

sounds like a very dreamy entry did you win. Andrea well done on the Haiku, nicely done,..p.d

wow! seriously fabulous haiku. I do not know the image that was used but the one created in my mind's eye is amazing! I had to write you as I LMAO at your comment on my 'desert' poem! thanks for the comment and the smile that still lingers : )) xoxo

Andrea...If I had to pick a favorite line it would be the last one...Whew! (The first and second ain't too shabby either!) Awesome alliteration too... Not surprised it's a winner! - Tim

Hey Andrea, Congratulations on your win in the contest! Enjoy! ....Jimmy

Congratulations on your deserving poetry's win Andrea. Awesome job on entry. Agape, Moses

Three marvellous lines in your Haiku Andrea, congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

I really like this one. I particularly like the last line. Congratulations on your win.

Do you have a copy of this picture Andie? I would love to see it. Your haiku is very descriptive and I will bet it was a beautiful picture. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Connie

AHH I CAN VISUALIZE THIS... GOOD HAIKU WRITE

Congrats Andrea on your winning poem and placement in Raul's contest.. wonderful write and win for u so enjoy my friend..luv.. Linda-Marie..

really like the contrast you put in here, Andrea, you sure are getting the hang of haiku :)! congrats on your win with this one :)

Andrea, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

ohh, sounds dark & cool.my recent poem is not for the contest.im posting the once for it tonight.im just editing it,it's called night boy.i like how you used black wings to portray the night -Always&Forever Lynette

This Haiku...I love it..I love the twilight and that sapphire sky..awesome..you described the wings of those birds so well...lovely..Charma