Gone With the Tide

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between the then and now an evergrowing ridge severing our past gone hazy forever irretrievable AP: 3rd place 2021, Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on October 6, 2020 for contest COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (22) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/20/2020 6:56:00 AM

"gone hazy" - it is odd to me how some of these hazy things pop back into our life at a later date, and are not as hazy.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/20/2020 1:33:00 PM

life is full of mysteries ~

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/8/2020 10:45:00 AM

So true. Past gone forever. Congrats to win. Love.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/8/2020 7:27:00 PM

Thanks, Anisha. Much appreciated ~

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/6/2020 7:55:00 AM

Line, your poignant pen expresses the lose of love with beautiful sadness. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/6/2020 1:49:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Susan ~