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Gone With the Tide

between
the then and now
an evergrowing ridge
severing
our past
gone hazy
forever
irretrievable



AP: 3rd place 2021, Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 6:56 AM
"gone hazy" - it is odd to me how some of these hazy things pop back into our life at a later date, and are not as hazy.
Gauthier Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 1:33 PM
life is full of mysteries ~
Dutta Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 10:45 AM
So true. Past gone forever. Congrats to win. Love.
Gauthier Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 7:27 PM
Thanks, Anisha. Much appreciated ~
Ashley Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 7:55 AM
Line, your poignant pen expresses the lose of love with beautiful sadness. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 1:49 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Susan ~
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