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Beetle Sees Daylight

Beetle crawls up out of his deep dark home in the ground to see daylight, which does nothing to make his day, while his eyes are adjusting to the light, Mr Hawk flies down to have breakfast, talk about a bad day for Mr. Beetle. Written 4-14-11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/29/2011 2:43:00 PM
LOL - poor old Mr Beetle : ) You've made me chuckle before I turn in for the night, James
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Date: 4/25/2011 9:26:00 AM
A cute write and he indeed, had a very bad day. Phyl
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Date: 4/24/2011 4:57:00 AM
Haha, this made me laugh. Bad day indeed. How I wish Mr. Hawk preyed on something bigger and saved the beetle from a sad fate in the process. I guess he was on a diet. Oh, well, but that's life. Thanks for your kind words, I'm glad to know you enjoyed reading my poems. I'll try to pop in here once in a while, and post a poem or two while I'm at it. Enjoy your day!
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Date: 4/24/2011 4:55:00 AM
This is so cute James , last line makes it special. Thank you for your kind coments on my poetry. Your friend in poetry. Anne
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Date: 4/23/2011 11:39:00 PM
Just love your style. And to write about ordinary topics yet in a creative way. CUTE.
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Date: 4/21/2011 10:14:00 PM
Very witty, James. I think this poem makes a statement on human life as well though. I'll be dodging those hawks! Enjoyed the story behind this compelling poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:23:00 PM
The circle of life continues .. nicely written James but feeling bad for the poor beetle..luv.. the power of this hawk...no match luv..
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