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Beetle

It was just a 1964 Beetle dressed in its finest VW red; the best car on the road, spin on a dime, driv’in half a mile on fumes with three spark plugs; yes I said three spark plugs, don’t you know the forth wouldn’t stay plugged in, it popped out every time and rattled around instead. Another mile and a half of sheer magic and all mine. Her taste for winter spent and the drip, drip, drip of rain on my head from the ripped sunroof; frosted on the inside, drive with one hand, while you scrape frost with the other hand, but It’ll get’cha there kind of car... yeah it was mine, my first car oh, that power. Some cars do their duty until the very end, that’s a 1964 VW Beetle.

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Date: 2/12/2023 6:12:00 PM
Nothing like those old beetles. Brings back a flood of memories, M.L. Thanks!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/13/2023 12:31:00 PM
My first car; yes I do miss it. Those things could do amazing stuff. Thanks Gershon.

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