Beetle

It was just a 1964 Beetle
dressed in its finest
VW red;
the best car
on the road,
spin on a dime,
driv’in  half a mile on fumes
with three spark plugs;
yes I said three spark plugs,
don’t you know the forth
wouldn’t stay plugged in,
it popped out every time and 
rattled around instead.
Another mile and a half
of sheer magic
and all mine.

Her taste for winter spent
and the drip, drip, drip
of rain on my head
from the ripped sunroof;
frosted on the inside,
drive with one hand,
while you scrape frost
with the other hand,
but It’ll get’cha there
kind of car...
yeah it was mine,
my first car
oh, that power.

Some cars 
do their duty 
until the very end,
that’s a 1964 VW Beetle.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kingston Avatar
June 9, 2025 at 2:13 PM
Cars give us lots of memories, I think. I had station wagon in college. I don't believe they are made anymore My mother had a red one with white seats, but was so loud even with the muffler intact. It must have been hard to give it up. I hope it's ok to say, but your poem could almost a human friend in a way. I hope to write like you someday
Wolf Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 6:12 PM
Nothing like those old beetles. Brings back a flood of memories, M.L. Thanks!
Kiser Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 12:31 PM
My first car; yes I do miss it. Those things could do amazing stuff. Thanks Gershon.
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