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Bee Creative

This hive is our home, We work many long hours. Our boss is the queen lady, For sweet honey we do make. Each day we need to visit many flowers, We gather pollen from our flower friends. As we buzz around we see the world, Everything looks so huge to us. We may be small but we are powerful, A sweet life we do have here in our hives. Date Written: 5/26/2022

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Bill Baker

Date: 6/18/2022 3:02:00 PM

Thanks for sharing the life of bees with us, Paula. Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/19/2022 10:57:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like my Bee write. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............

Valsa George

Date: 5/28/2022 11:43:00 PM

Though the bees have to work hard, their life is one of love, unity and contentment....Your poem is sweet like honey and as simple as honey bee.... !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2022 2:28:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my write. Oh yes, the very hard working lovable little sweet honey bee. Hooray to them. Have a great/blessed day...............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2022 4:25:00 PM

Sweet as a honey bee!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2022 7:50:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my honey Bee write. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 5/28/2022 1:58:00 AM

Just popped in to see your poems, Paula. Bee poems are fun to write, I made a mistake with mine I forgot the challenge was from a bee's perspective. This is very enjoyable....Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/28/2022 8:28:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my Bee write. Have a great/blessed weekend...............

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/27/2022 10:56:00 AM

Your charming dramatic monologue is very bee-lievable, Paula. Great writing! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2022 1:12:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like my Bee-lievable write. Have a great/blessed weekend...............

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/26/2022 6:36:00 PM

Powerful and meaningful verse, Paula. best wishes for the contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2022 10:27:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like my Bee write. Have a great/blessed weekend...............