Bee Creative

This hive is our home,
We work many long hours.
Our boss is the queen lady,
For sweet honey we do make.
Each day we need to visit many flowers,
We gather pollen from our flower friends.
As we buzz around we see the world,
Everything looks so huge to us.
We may be small but we are powerful,
A sweet life we do have here in our hives.
Date Written: 5/26/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 3:02 PM
Thanks for sharing the life of bees with us, Paula. Bill
Goldsmith Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 10:57 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like my Bee write. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............
George Avatar
May 28, 2022 at 11:43 PM
Though the bees have to work hard, their life is one of love, unity and contentment....Your poem is sweet like honey and as simple as honey bee.... !
Goldsmith Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 2:28 PM
Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my write. Oh yes, the very hard working lovable little sweet honey bee. Hooray to them. Have a great/blessed day...............
Dietrich Avatar
May 28, 2022 at 4:25 PM
Sweet as a honey bee!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 7:50 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my honey Bee write. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend...............
Skelly Avatar
May 28, 2022 at 1:58 AM
Just popped in to see your poems, Paula. Bee poems are fun to write, I made a mistake with mine I forgot the challenge was from a bee's perspective. This is very enjoyable....Delice
Goldsmith Avatar
May 28, 2022 at 8:28 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my Bee write. Have a great/blessed weekend...............
Buehler Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 10:56 AM
Your charming dramatic monologue is very bee-lievable, Paula. Great writing! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 1:12 PM
Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like my Bee-lievable write. Have a great/blessed weekend...............
Poet Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 6:36 PM
Powerful and meaningful verse, Paula. best wishes for the contest
Goldsmith Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 10:27 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like my Bee write. Have a great/blessed weekend...............
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