Bee-Ware

I think that I shall never see an insect scary as a bee Sister screams, she spots a spider but bees are lethal when they bite her... I cower at bees' buzzing sound as they circle round and round If I try to wave 'em away They attack, without delay... Logic tells me not to cower Bees are needed to grow flowers ~ Let reason try another tack Lest reason also BEE attacked

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Sand Blown

Date: 10/14/2020 12:48:00 PM

...a nicely writ rite-write wrote right.... but (mmmhahahaaa) ze vell known.... preying mantis...ees kvite et home ven eeting struggling vasps andt hornets... alive!......gives me the creeps with respect the alien-predator movies....... stan

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/14/2020 1:32:00 AM

Bees we need wasps we squash lol Tom

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/14/2020 2:31:00 PM

Thanks for the succinctness -- and the laugh, Tom.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/13/2020 8:08:00 PM

This reads like a jazzy song!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/13/2020 8:18:00 PM

It's the old Joyce Kilmer rhythm: 'I think that I shall never see // a thing as lovely as a tree. We all puked reciting this one in high school. lol. Though I'd lighten it up a bit. Cheers, gw

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/13/2020 7:18:00 PM

Cute one. I’m okay with Bees but not a fan of hornets.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/13/2020 8:17:00 PM

Truth be told, wasps scare me out of my bejeeber. lol. Thanks, Richard.