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Beckoning Sun

along the roadside the melting snow lays in clumps I breathe in fresh air walking towards a new Spring the warm sun beckons me on

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/21/2014 7:08:00 PM

so dreamy and lovely Francine super pen

Matthew Anish

Date: 3/19/2014 7:51:00 PM

Nice poem - I wish spring would get here already. We had a rough winter here in NYC, You project happiness in this work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/19/2014 9:01:00 AM

Makes me want to go outside for a walk. The awakening of lifes rebirth. Thanks for the breath of fresh air. Peace. :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/18/2014 3:36:00 PM

It's been a while since I've seen something new from you. This is a nicely written write.

Francine Roberts
Date: 3/18/2014 3:49:00 PM

brain dead these days, start a few , never seem to get past the third line. Hope you're keeping well Robert

Sandip Goswami

Date: 3/17/2014 2:56:00 PM

Nice written dear...I am enjoying a new spring in India with frustration because winter has gone . Very hot weather is coming , it's called summer of India....But inner meaning of the poem is very good...Best wishes from India...

Joseph Sergi

Date: 3/11/2014 7:32:00 PM

Francine nice work give me hope that spring will so be here

Daver Austin

Date: 3/10/2014 5:13:00 PM

A men. What a winter, eh, Francine. Good stuff. LOve, daver