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Premiere Contest WinnerBecause of My Poetic Words

I have been called quite vain,
            conceited, arrogant, boastful with too much pride;
because of my poetic words . . . 
And I have been slain by "his" sword,
                          time and time again;
"he" meant to destroy me and extinguish my light.
     Woes filled my heart,
             my suffering was grievous and full of anguish;
                          and I felt beaten down and drained,
            a cloak of doom fell upon me.
  I wanted to erase all my poetry wins;
            whispering-  Oh, what is wrong with showing pride ?

                         My head was full of evil fiends,
            with demons and devils wicked and so mean;
for a long while I just refrained,
oh, did abstain from writing poetry . . . 
                        Yes, I just ceased writing,
but it was difficult to hold back and not pen;
      and I could not do it.
            For I am addicted to writing my words,
                        devoted, obsessed with poem writing;
             I think it was predetermined at my birth.
  Written in the book of my life and by God ordained;
             I am destined to write-  no matter who likes it !

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August 2, 2019


Poetry/Verse/Because of My Poetic Words
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1170-538-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Written for the contest, Eight Word Challenge
sponsor, Emile Pinet

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Jayasankar Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 3:41 AM
Wow... your words straight from the heart Constance...and so true...so beautiful....your passion for writing is seen here... God bless you dear friend. Love n hugs.. ~ Ani
La France Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 9:43 AM
Ani, thank you for visiting my older poem and for the compliment and comment, yes back when I wrote this in 2019 I was being bullied by a gang of poets on a mission to destroy poets, I actually left but could not stay away so here I am and guess what it is that gang of bullies who are gone _Constance
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 6:20 AM
Poets need poetry like we need air to breathe. You have written a deep beauty Constance! Congratulations on your deserving Second place win! : ) xxoo
La France Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 12:40 PM
Connie thanks for the nice comment and the congratulations
Agustin Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 3:20 AM
Wow! Congrats!!! Very well said are your poetic-intransigence words: "I think it was predetermined at my birth. Written in the book of my life and by God ordained; I am destined to write- no matter who likes it!" GOD BLESS YOU.
La France Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 12:39 PM
Beata thanks for the congratulations and the compliment. I love those lines that fell from my heart also ~
Roper Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 11:34 AM
Awesome write my dear friend you are an artist of your own making and a very beautiful one. Congratulations on your awesome very well deserved 1st place win. Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 12:36 PM
Eve thanks for the congratulations and the compliment, appreciate
Pinet Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 8:03 AM
Congratulations Constance, your poem has placed "First" in my PoetrySoup contest. Very well done my friend, a well deserved win, Emile
La France Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 8:19 AM
Emile, thank you for another inspiring contest and for my awesome win !
Adams Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 7:35 PM
I had an ex who actually burned all of my poetry from 16-28....he didn't think poetry was anything to be proud of, and though i can never get them back, part of me is glad because i have grown, yet part of me longs to see what i wrote in my younger days....i really like this one :) hugs
La France Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 12:35 PM
Sandra thanks for the visit and comment. I have years of lost poetry and it is like a dagger in my heart
Michael Avatar
August 3, 2019 at 8:03 AM
You write to breathe, you write to be, you write for love...You can't stop...no matter who thinks what...Well done
La France Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 12:33 PM
Arturo thanks for the nice comment and compliment
Romios Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 9:02 PM
Dear Heart! No quitting allowed for those who write like you. Thank you. Panagiota
La France Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 12:32 PM
Panagiota, thanks for the visit and the compliment
Merryman Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 8:24 PM
As long as you have inspiration, Dear Heart, don't quit writing. You have a special talent. I enjoyed reading your poem and best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
La France Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 12:29 PM
Kim thanks for visiting my poem and for the compliment ~
Blown Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 1:54 PM
in eight words: dear heart... yet you know... what we like...
La France Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 12:29 PM
Sand, thanks for visiting and for the compliment ~
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