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With mental arms, I gather up the reasons Why I love you ..... Our season came in springtime You did not intend to be my knight No white steed, nor heroic plan Just a man.... But like a tree, standing tall When seasons came, to swallow whole You wrapped strong limbs around me And kept me safe A shelter strong and deeply rooted Of which the leaves are songs, A lyric quiet and soft and gentle With cradled moments to let me lean Then, with tender breeze That pushed me into the sun... Painfully young, and damp behind our ears... And at the edge of jagged worlds unknown We took the dare and leaped, without a glance... With little chance...that we would survive the fall... But like young birds, we soared, ...you made me sure Your wings were spread, you led me in the glide... With dependability, faithfulness, security, kindness... And as a man.....not a complicated man, Perhaps, rather ordinary, from another's point of view... The view from here, ....so high, we flew... Has always been quite grand.... With capable, weathered, calloused, caressing hands... You caressed our lives, ....my own, and those of our children.. Keeping us safe....for all these years... And taking us on a glorious ride, on wings that fly...above the highest trees... To a land, where love knows no end... ______________________________________________

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Date: 1/16/2012 6:36:00 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Awesome. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 1/16/2012 2:35:00 PM
Nicely penned Carrie. Sounds like he is a lucky man. Congratulations
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Date: 1/16/2012 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Love Poem" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/15/2012 11:06:00 PM
CARRIE., CONGRATULATIONS!!! thank you for your wonderful and lovely poem.. Have fun in my next contest. always your one and only~ PD.
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Date: 1/15/2012 8:18:00 PM
congrats Carrie on an exciting win for this beautiful poetry entry ...
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:16:00 AM
Congragtulations on the win in the contest,Carrie
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:15:00 AM
Congragtulations on the win in the contest,Carrie
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Date: 9/6/2011 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Flying" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2011 1:04:00 PM
"To a land, where love knows no end" Love this line Carrie, Congratulations on a superb Job on your worthy poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/5/2011 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "FLYING" poetry contest sponsored by Debbie Guzzi CR
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Date: 9/5/2011 3:46:00 AM
hey Carrie congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/5/2011 2:32:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your excellent win with this extraordinaire' write so creative on flying luv..
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Date: 9/4/2011 9:20:00 PM
AH Carrie so beautiful Congratulations my friend God when you speak I listen and feel you! WOW is all I can say! Laura :)
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Date: 9/4/2011 5:25:00 PM
Such a stunning poem from one of my favorite writers. So happy to see you placing high in Deb's contest. Congratulations, Carrie! Of the entries I've read, this is truly a standout. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/4/2011 4:53:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS my friend for this 4th placement in the contest~~smile~~~
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Date: 4/19/2011 10:46:00 PM
You got me dazzled, Carrie (had to use it!! & it holds so true for this beauty!)-- this is so heartfelt-- you are so blessed to have such an amazing man in your life, a beautiful love you really deserve-- you speak from the heart with this & it totally shows-- congrats on your win & thank so much for all your inspiring words in mine :D hugs to you! :)
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Date: 4/19/2011 1:26:00 PM
arghhhhhhhh ditto Congrad's on your exempliary poetic verse winning! Light & Love
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Date: 4/19/2011 1:18:00 PM
A stunning write Carrie, congratulations on your win, love Wilma
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Date: 4/19/2011 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest, Carrie
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Date: 4/19/2011 7:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Razzle, Dazzle" Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:49:00 AM
ABSOLUTLY BEAUTIFUL! Touched me deeply. We should all be so fortunate. Beauiful tribute to an extraordinary man, Carrie. Many congrats. Love, Lainie
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Date: 4/18/2011 9:22:00 PM
h Carrie this so tenderly touched my heart. Loved it. Many congrats.
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Date: 4/18/2011 8:46:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your success in my contest luv.. appreciate your constant support.. my winners list is now posted to view .. all fixed..
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Date: 1/14/2011 5:13:00 PM
You really write some beautiful pieces...You should know I'm crying...
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Date: 6/16/2010 7:53:00 PM
beautiful
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