Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- Beauty Is Looking Into Your Eyes and Seeing Your Heart -

Twilight has it's own wings and its own melody
Battles with the mystery of a sun setting horizon dawning hues 

Pearl white smile's from the moon, in a mood of beautiful seduction
Oracle within one thousand chants dances with the shadows of night shades 

For you, I will catch every star that I see in the evening sky surrenders 
Sparkling silver dust their trails leave magic spells whispers deeply winds 

Drinking from the milky way a mix of delicious chocolate 
Icing of a thousand shape shifting patterns emerge glowing 

Soft caramel and gorgeous nougat smiles golden melting 
Under a canopy of stars you remain cradled forever beautiful  
I would love to dance like planets that circulate around the sun
Blood's rivers are like red cherries and float like wine
Its colorful aura exudes amazing happiness
Sweet like a dream, I lean my cheek on lace pillows
Everything feels so right, our love will grow strong














A collaborated poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 
11.01.2018

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* Poem of the Week ; 14.01.2018

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Darlene De Beaulieu January 21, 2018 at 1:56 PM Sunshine Smile to me this is a Free Verse poem and also a romantic poem. This is how I see your poem. Both ways. Have a nice day my friend. Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2018 at 2:06 PM - It's a romantic free verse, dear Darlene :) - Glad you enjoy it, many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One January 21, 2018 at 5:03 AM Trying to congratulate you on potw but soup seems to be playing up! Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2018 at 2:08 PM - ... but you did it ... "soup" should not be played with ... :) - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Hagy January 20, 2018 at 8:52 PM Congrats on potw... birds will be happy :) Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2018 at 6:42 AM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Chris - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Gondolf January 20, 2018 at 6:12 PM Anne-Lise, congratulations on POTW. John Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2018 at 6:42 AM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, John - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France January 19, 2018 at 9:58 PM Sunshine, a big CONGRATULATIONS on POTW ! Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2018 at 12:38 PM - Thank you very much, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams January 17, 2018 at 6:21 AM A great collaboration Anne-Lise and Liam, like always you deliver a beautiful poem, so no surprise to see it awarded POTW, so well deserved on this beauty...Maria xxx Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2018 at 12:25 PM - Thanks for lovely words and congratulations, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian January 16, 2018 at 4:31 PM This is such a beauty because the feelings that it brings to the heart bring a sense of love and peace. Thank you both for this collab. Celestially sweet. Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2018 at 3:55 AM - A pleasure ... a sense of love and peace is something we need today, dear Eileen :) - Thanks for your friendly visit and congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Loughman January 16, 2018 at 8:45 AM Congratulations Anne-Lise & Liam on POTW! Well done a well deserved on this beautiful poem! Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2018 at 3:52 AM - Always nice to have someone to share the credit with - Thank you Donna, for your beautiful greetings and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman January 16, 2018 at 6:43 AM Dear Anne-Lise and Liam!! Best Congratulations on this wondrous selection of yours being chosen as "POTW"!! A marvelously written free verse in every respect!! All The Best . . . Gary Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2018 at 3:50 AM - Thank you for your greetings and congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid January 16, 2018 at 6:04 AM also thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments deeply appreciated wishing you all a blessed year ahead Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2018 at 3:48 AM - X X -

Liam Mcdaid January 16, 2018 at 6:03 AM congratulations anne lise warmly it brought a smile Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2018 at 3:47 AM - Congratulations to you too, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Marilyn Williams January 15, 2018 at 6:07 PM Sweet little diddy of love. Congrats on your POTW. It's a ten. Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2018 at 3:46 AM - Many thanks for your visit, congratulations and comment, Marilyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Fleming January 15, 2018 at 10:51 AM Very well done on your POTW, Anne-Lise...what a marvellous kaleidoscope of colour you have penned here - a joy to read! My very best regards. :) john Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2018 at 1:04 PM - Thanks for lovely words and congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing January 14, 2018 at 10:25 PM I'm coming back for another read on this enchanting piece. And wanted to congratulate you on POTW! Hugs and smiles :) Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2018 at 1:03 PM - Always welcome to my poem, Akkina :) - Thanks for lovely words and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May January 14, 2018 at 3:17 PM A beautiful collaboration Anne and Liam... Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2018 at 1:02 PM - Thank you for your friendly visit and your lovely comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tumaini Elias January 14, 2018 at 12:39 PM Oracle within one thousand chants,nice one i appreciate this work of ART Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2018 at 1:37 PM - Thanks for lovely words and congratulations, Tumaini :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud January 14, 2018 at 12:38 PM another greeat team-up which enchants...sweet congrats on POTW citation, anne and liam.... happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2018 at 1:35 PM Greatly appreciates it, dear Nette ... thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong January 14, 2018 at 12:04 PM You two make magic together! I loved this romantic celebration of the beauty of love in the arms of nature. Wonderfully expressed by your pens! Congratulations on having this beauty honored deservedly with POTW! : ) Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2018 at 1:34 PM - A great honor and pleasure, many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Connie :) - Greatly appreciates it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter January 14, 2018 at 11:21 AM You both can really write, Sunshine!!! Congratulations! Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2018 at 12:03 PM - Thanks for lovely words and congratulations, Sunlite - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison January 14, 2018 at 7:00 AM oh wow what an awesome collaboration and many congrats on POTW!!!!:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2018 at 7:02 AM - Really? ... thanks for a nice surprise, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux January 13, 2018 at 9:21 AM You both did amazing on this piece. Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2018 at 7:08 AM - Thank you for your friendly visit and your lovely comment, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman January 13, 2018 at 8:15 AM Dear Anne-Lise and Liam, A great collaboration here. This one has the immediate aura of enchantment through and through. Beautifully rendered with marvelous imagery. Outstanding Work, and A FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2018 at 7:07 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment on Liams and my poem - appreciate your "fav.", dear friend Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alesia Leach January 12, 2018 at 7:55 PM You both paint a lovely picture, a wonderful collaboration. Loved reading. Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2018 at 7:06 AM - Alesia, many thanks for the lovely comment on Liams and my poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Swartz January 12, 2018 at 6:20 PM A wonderful poem and beautiful words. You two wrote a great piece together. Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2018 at 7:06 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment on Liams and my poem James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing January 12, 2018 at 3:34 PM Oh this is a great collab. So romantic and simply beautiful! I love it! Hugs and smiles :) Anne-Lise Andresen January 13, 2018 at 3:21 PM - Thank you for your friendly visit and your lovely comment, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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