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Beauty

Madness, chaotic. Screams of wonderment, enchantment, fill the air, like smog. Women, with long hair, long dresses, long legs, long lives ahead of them, dance endlessly, around and around and around and around. Men, sneering and preying and lurching on these long women, ready to hold them captive with dreams of desire. Children, leaping and cheering and discovering what adults do, why are they doing that? should we be doing that? Air swirling, excitement sways from one side to the other. God must be ignoring this, or the Devil is in control, possibly both. Whatever it may be, it is beauty in its most pure form.

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Date: 10/19/2017 5:24:00 PM
This is wonderful, beautiful imagery
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Aliya Backstrom
Date: 10/19/2017 6:36:00 PM
Thank you so so so much!!
Date: 10/19/2017 5:21:00 PM
Wow, this is amazing
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Aliya Backstrom
Date: 10/19/2017 6:26:00 PM
Goodness, thank you so much!
Date: 10/18/2017 8:32:00 AM
You paint a vivid picture - well done, Aliya!
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Aliya Backstrom
Date: 10/19/2017 6:25:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sara! I appreciate your comment!
Date: 10/15/2017 9:43:00 AM
Fantastic. A kaleidoscope of fascination around and around . I look forward to reading your creative thoughts. welcome to poetrysoup ;)
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Aliya Backstrom
Date: 10/15/2017 11:36:00 PM
Oh my, thank you so much for your wonderful words! <3
Date: 9/18/2017 3:38:00 PM
Excellent.. yes, it must be beauty in its most pure form.. Great first post, welcome to poetry soup..
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Aliya Backstrom
Date: 9/19/2017 12:02:00 AM
Wow, thank you so much, appreciate your comment!
Date: 9/17/2017 11:52:00 PM
Wonderful poem Aliyah, great imagery in there. And welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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Aliya Backstrom
Date: 9/18/2017 9:39:00 AM
Ah, thank you very much Darrren! I appreciate your hospitality <3
Date: 9/17/2017 2:42:00 PM
- A great poem, Aliya - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - // S.S.
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Aliya Backstrom
Date: 9/17/2017 2:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, your kindness means a lot to me!

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