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Beauty, Before Me

"Stay with me through the darkness until we find another sunny day." Dodge through the rain drops falling fast jump puddles not worrying about getting wet take my hand and my heart, come hold me close embrace my imperfections and this life we have chose Slip-slide down this path of resistance with me being my rock when tiny pebbles roll free help find my sun hiding when all seems lost don't let me go under without one last gasp Of the beauty, before me, that surrounds cherished in precious seas of love found golden flowers sway gentle in the breeze carrying off splendor for us to forever see

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/10/2017 10:00:00 AM

Now for such a love, ah! Lovely, Tim:)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/8/2017 10:17:00 PM

Its hard to find someone who is willing to go through the bad times for the good, that for sure is true love!

Sara Ella

Date: 4/6/2017 7:01:00 PM

A beautiful poem Tim <3 This is what love is all about :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 4/6/2017 8:56:00 AM

Now that's love.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2017 7:23:00 AM

- Beautiful love, Tim - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/5/2017 10:45:00 PM

This is a deeply moving love poem, almost like a supplication. Amitiés

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2017 6:30:00 PM

This is gorgeous writing from you, Tim. A SEVEN.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/5/2017 4:28:00 PM

Good Evening Tim. In my eyes, I see poetic perfection. All elements are present. Truly stunning to the eye and ear. Well done entirely and an honor to read.

Doug Vinson

Date: 4/5/2017 3:48:00 PM

Dang, Tim, you have the feeling. : )

Chris Green

Date: 4/5/2017 3:37:00 PM

What a beautiful rhyming poem of love. This is a heart-toucher Tim.

Jean Murray

Date: 4/5/2017 3:21:00 PM

They don't make men like you anymore Tim. In my locality it's my reality that romance is dead.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/5/2017 2:27:00 PM

Beautiful and uplifting Tim I love the embrace my imperfections line ... so important to accept each other's differences in a relationship for it to truly work;-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/5/2017 2:11:00 PM

This poem lifts up our spirits.It is so beautiful Tim..We all need that someone special we can count on in our lives..especially when its rainy...and darkness falls.Fantastic.A fave

Darren White

Date: 4/5/2017 1:59:00 PM

Everyone deserves someone to look right through imperfections, right into that wonderful big heart they possess. Beautiful poetry, my friend...